Cool. Best chapter out of the bunch so far.

Gohan doesn't sound too impressed with Marty's powers, does he? LOL. Makes me wonder if he's jealous!

LOL Farty? O-kay.

Hm...short chapter but still descriptive.

Um...okay! LOL Still reading but I'll let you know if I think of any comments. Any constructive comments, that is! *g*

*blink* this is weird.

BOOO! I'm sorry for being so rude, but this doesn't work at all. Since I read both one and two, I shall comment on both. There is no backstory at all to Doc being back in Marty's present, this DTS thing you come up with would never work that way, and the rest of it was rather poor. Two was even worse. I'm sorry, but this doesn't deserve a place among fanfic of the best time travel movie of all time. However, I am not flaming you, merely sharing my opinion. I have nothing against you personally. BTW, if you have an interest in the PowerPuff Girls, then read my fic "Nightmare Becomes Reality". It only has two chapters up so far, but it is coming along nicely.

great story and i think number 1 is as good as number 2

:raises eyebrow: Ummm...okay. Abrup ending, and the whole thing now looks rather pointless in retrospect, but not bad. Better than some stuff here on .

Cool, some action. More!

o_O Murrff? That was...weird. I think I'll go like down now. I'm a bit disturbed. O_o Uhhhhh...more chapters!

Yay! New chapter! Although wouldn't Marty a bit old for high school? With your timeframe, Marty would be about 20. Ah, well, all for the sake of plot. Keep it coming!

COOL! MORE! I need more of this fanfic! I shall wither away otherwise. Nice twist there, BTW. Very interesting. I wish somone would draw a pic of this. I wonder what an anime-d Marty would look like... Heh. Superhero Marty! (Not to mention he rescued the timeline a couple of times). Me like! I'll be onme the lookout for more!

Cool! Write more, write more! And don't ya mean "hoverboard"? Man, I'd love to Marty flying around on Nimbus! Ohhh, I wish there was some fanart for this! Especially with Marty in his Future Boy outfit, maybe out flying on Nimbus. Hah! Future Boy. Cute. And also oddly coincidental, as I watched the ep "Gohan Goes to High School" today. He may be able to take on monstes, and travel across the galaxy to save a world, but high school is another matter entirely! :goes to plan a Saiyagirl/Saiyawoman outfit: _ yeah, I need to find better things to do!

Please, please, write another chapter soon! I'm beggin ya!