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| procol harum 2008-08-01 ch 12, | abuseGreat story... I was never a Booker hater, and this story was fun to read, but christ, I feel so sorry for him. I was happy when he got married, and then when Elaina died I was thinking no she can't be because she just got married... And then Booker beating Tom? you really do love to hurt him(tom) lol. Great job, you should try another Booker story sometime, there's not enough of them. |
| FeedYourHead77 2008-07-31 ch 12, | abuseHuge sniffle factor for that one, babe. Wow. I didn't tear up too much the first time around, but now you've really got me going :'( I loved the Baby Booker addition. So sweet and necessary. Hope Dennis will be able to find some happiness in the future, something to smile about. You're the kind of writer that makes heartstrings pull. Damn you. Always very thorough and convincing. Never anything but extremely talented. I'm so honored to be able to read your work. Thank you. As always, FYH (FeedYourHead77) |
| FeedYourHead77 2008-07-31 ch 11, | abuseTommy in FLANNEL! I missed that the first time! Hahaha, I really need to go watch my 21 J.S. DVDs now. Like all of them. Damn you, woman, I don't have time to waste on that! Oh well. I'll make time!! LOL. And on to the real review...so glad that Booker got the rings back, and the lighter (which I had forgotten about). I love how Booker and Elaina (RIP) are now wearing each other's rings, very sweet and poetic. Tripped out the door made me laugh. That's exactly something Hanson would say to cover for a friend. And have you noticed how my reviews always are more Hanson-centric then Booker. I'm just a little obsessed, it seems. To BOOKER...glad he got a bit of revenge/vengeance for himself and Elaina. They both deserve it so much. |
| FeedYourHead77 2008-07-31 ch 10, | abuseDespite your uncomfortably (that the right word??) you did really well with the subject addressed in this chappie. Poor Booker. And poor Tommy, trying to help however he can. I can still see where Booker is coming from, for sure. The loss of Amy wasn't the same as Elaina, but it was the closest anyone knows and Tom was just wanted to help. So true how Tom is the only guy that would worry more about Booker than himself in that kind of situation. Penhall IS wise on occasion. Haha, love Dougie--you do him well, maybe more of him in Vengance? Hmm, I'm not really gonna comment on the last part 'cause that stuff is hard for me too. You made everything very convincing, though. I'll leave it at that. |
| FeedYourHead77 2008-07-31 ch 9, | abuseAll right, first things first...what a cute little grand-baby! You must be so proud and happy! Congratulations to you and your family! And the story...poor Booker, again, of course. Poor Tommy too. I hated how much pain he was in in Orpheus 3.3. Go Angie! And big YAY for the blue Ford Mustang!! Hahaha. |
| FeedYourHead77 2008-07-31 ch 8, | abuseWow. I feel so much worse for Booker reading this chapter another time. Damn. Poor guy. (Bad you!) Also, I absolutely love how you had him give Elaina HIS wedding band. AMAZING addition that I didn't really recognize before. ...meant to say thanks for the little shout out at the end. So sweet. Again, SO SORRY for not getting the chance to review earlier! |
| FeedYourHead77 2008-07-31 ch 7, | abuseJust a question...how can you ask us not to hate you when you do terrible things like that?!! Why did you have to kill her?? Wait...was it those EVIL plot bunnies??! They sneak into your head and do this badness?! That must be the reason. Phew, I don't hate you anymore. Hehe. |
| lamexicana 2008-07-30 ch 12, | abuseouch... i made a pool of tears... So sad... so sad... Thanks for this beautiful story, very sad but very good one. So... i´m expecting the end of trapped... Thank you very much.. |
| tewksgirl 2008-07-30 ch 12, | abuseAh, what a touching ending. I love this story...of course though, I love all your stories! I'm glad that Dennis was finally able to at least say some sort of good bye to her. I'm glad that Tom and Doug were there for him too. Now, on to Trapped and Vengeance! YEAH! oh, I am so excited! (As I've said before, I really need to get a life. Wouldn't it be great if our hubbies got this exited about us? HA LOL!) |
| tewksgirl 2008-07-30 ch 11, | abuseGreat job...I really liked this chapter. I'm glad that Tom and Doug found Dennis and caught the two that killed Elaina. I have a feeling that the next chapter is going to be a sad one. |
| tewksgirl 2008-07-29 ch 10, | abuseOh yeah! Tommy got his a** kicked! (Why does that make me so happy?) Dougie to the rescue...god, how I love that! Poor Dennis though, to hear what happened to his wife. Truly heartbreaking! But you did an excellent job of writing it! I can't wait to see what happens next! BTW, the grandbaby is just adorable! Congrats again! |
| lamexicana 2008-07-29 ch 10, | abuseF... wow... i was going to say a very very bad word. Let him kill those son of... OK. Lets cool myself. Great chapter, both are great in fact. Seeing Booker so down... Please update soon. And congratulations ¡¡ your baby boy is beautiful¡ |
| tewksgirl 2008-07-29 ch 9, | abuseYeah..I'm so glad you updated. I'm glad that Angie was there to comfort Booker...and Hanson. I can't wait to see the action coming soon! A little off subject...I'm guessing that this story takes place after the one you haven't written yet (Vengeance)? Just because the preview for Vengeance says that Tommy is still recovering from being stabbed and all. BTW, congrats to the new grandson! |
| FeedYourHead77 2008-07-25 ch 6, | abuseSorry sorry sorry for the late reviews of Ch. 6, 7, & 8! I've been on vacation for the past few weeks and am leaving for home tomorrow. Time crunch hasn't given me the time to read and review, but here I am now! ...on that note, nice update as usual. I love the thought of little Bookers. Bit of a scary thought, actually. You know, I see bad things in my head-you're going to ruin the perfectness of Booker and Elaina. I don't think you should. Yup. Good idea, huh? Let's go with that plan! Hahaha. FYH |
| Ghostwriter 2008-07-24 ch 8, | abuseWow. Great emotional chap. Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side. |