 a2zmom 5/31/09 . chapter 1I just found this and it's fantastic. Love the format, moving forward in time and backward until the whole story is told. Very effective. Also beautifully in character, especially Buffy. One of the things I admire most about her is her resilience she'll obviously never be the same but she will carry on in the end. |
 WatsonandMary4ever 5/13/09 . chapter 1A great story. Very good. |
 Dragon Empress 8/3/08 . chapter 1Hey, this was good. I like the fact that it was jumbled and out of sequence, it was very cool and very sad. I'm impressed! |
 minako366 7/15/08 . chapter 1Aww, wicked sad, and a little hard to follow the sequence but it's good |
 E 7/12/08 . chapter 1 Love the idea, but I'm totally and utterly confused: I can't seem to follow the plot... Is it supposed to be this chopped up? Maybe it would be better if you just put everything in the right order... But, again: nice work! |