like it bro 5/5

but please update soon.

im glad your not dead but please update soon. and can you increase the chapter length

can't wait for more of this!

Whoa. This was amazing! Good grammar, good plot, and good characters! More than good, actually! _ This was a fantastic read, and I thank you from the bottom of my heart that you didn't drown the story in yaoi _*glomps* Thanks so much for writing as much as you did, and maybe when the plot bunnies return, could you get back to writing this? I'll beg. XD I loved this!

I really like this story and i am wondering if you are going to continue with it. P.S. Love how Hughes daughter thinks and acts.

Holy wow. I think you might have seriously died right now. o

Come back to life! We (I) miss you (and your updates)!

So, it seems you have been updating this year, and haven't completely fallen off the face of the earth and whatever other shezaz I've seen; being eaten, exams, house burning down, canary-eating-bunny-infested-rattler-poisoned-elephant-trampled-lion-mangled-lame-horse-sleep-deprived writers who don't update anymore. But... I think you should update. Or at least think about updating. Or dream about updating. 'Cause I really want to know what happens with this. I hope you update, and haven't lost inspiration or hope or motivation to write it, but if you have, I guess I'm going to have to deal with it and move on, hm? D

Well, anyway, I just wanted to pop by and say that there's still someone watching the story and hoping you'll update soon.

Best regards!

This story is really amazing, and the angst makes me want to cry, but it's good at the same time, because I at least hope that everything will end well. . (Yeah, that's me, I love angst, as long as there's a happy ending. I'm such a wuss...
Please update soon!

aw, this chapter was so sad.

Love the story so far

Aw, 'tis sad. You must write more for happiness.
It's been quite a while since the last update, so I hope the plot bunny for this story hasn't died...

Hope to see more soon.

N

great story. please update soon

I'm shattering the 123 momentum. 124 now.

Holy wow doused in a bucket of goat milk.

This is so tragically addicting that I absolutely must read more. Absolutely. I wonder how this is going to evolve into a Maes/Ed story. Well, I mean, obviously, but what words you're going to have them speak to resolve the issue. That's what intrigues me.

Anyways, I really look forward to reading the next chapter, and thank you for the read.

Wow. So sad.

I love the thought of Ed transmuting Hughes’ photos into a hat. It was great.

W0t! An update! Now...how about a few other fics?

Or have you stopped writing FMA fanfic? *is sad
...review: I'm glad that Maes knows, even tho this not the best, it is the best to clear out the unknown so one can move forward...

Like the interaction tween Maes and Ed. Nice!

...please don't stop writing FMA fanfic?

I've decided to find a good lyric to each chapter of this story, with these I hope I can tell what I feel about the chapter. The earlier two was sung and written by a man named Lars Winnerbäck. I'm not sure who wrote the lyrics of this one but the singer is Roger Pontare.

Please light an ember in my winterland

Reach through the blizzard a warming hand

Show the way to my paradise

Frozen and cold is my soul

As of ice