I have some ideas for next season with time reset without Queen Metalia. Enemy: Tree of Doom#1: Ranma-chan and Mamoru are dating#2: Ranma-kun is secretly the MoonKnight#3: Love-tri of Ranma/Mamoru/Usagi/Rei

Finally finished! It took only three days to read this bit! I can't wait until the next season! Also, are Ranma and Usagi going to meet face-to-face? Or is Ranma going to continue fighting from the sidelines without the othe Sailor Senshi knowing it?

Another interesting chapter. I look forward to your next chapter.

Shocking! Ranma's past life was in love with Prince Endymion, who in turn loved her. I am betting that because Usagi was also Sailor Moon, it confused Tusxedo Mask in finding his Sailor Moon.

Does this mean that Ranma would become the Queen of Crystal Tokyo? While Usagi becomes Neo-Queen Serenity of Neo-Moon Kingdom?

Please keep this up!

What a horrid first chapter.

So Ranma is locked into the same reincarnation routine as everyone else.

Before this chapter I had thought that the way the Amazons were presenting the Moon Kingdom and all was just their reinterpretation altered over generations of retelling.

I'm still uncertain how that aspect works out but this did help make things more interesting even if it was a bit short.

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really unexpected, I still don't believe that the senshi are 'ancient Amazon warriors' I'm curious where you'll take next.

Very nice work, a little convolited and in need of some better beta-checking, but those faults aside this is some of the better work i've read, so when are you going to stop following the normal un-crossed Sailor moon Cannon, and start doing your own Ranma Half Moon cannon.
Im also looking forward to the explaination of why there's two Sailor moons, mainly because i want to see how close my own personal explainations are to your truth.

A great chapter as always. I look to seeing your next chapter.

Another interesting chapter about these other characters in this work of fiction. I can't wait to see when they will be in the main story

A very interesting chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow this is screwy. I hope the next installment will be longer. if it isn't I think it might end up cutting off in the middle of the final battle between Usagi and Beryl.

So the dual on the school roof is a complete mess. First you have Ranma transformed in the stair way then you have all 3 transforming then on the roof they are back into the costumes for the fight? Its more convoluted than Metallia's mechanations explain. Being dead does Minako remember Ranma-chan again?

Are they even really on the school roof?

This could have been more coherent but you obviously weren't going for that.

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Another great chapter. I look forward to seeing what will happen next.

As always another great chapter. I look forward to seeing what will happen next