I'm liking these! You have captured their characters very well.

Well written! Keep writing!

Wonderful writing and refreshing perspective on a possible relationship between these two characters! I don't think I've ever encountered a story that focused on the past relationships of Tezuka, at least not ones that inadvertently show his dormant devotion to Ryoma. It was truly a satisfying read. Thanks for writing! =]

I like that you took this approach; it isn't too often that authors want to even think about couples they like dating anyone else. It made it realistic because sometimes you just don't know what you want or the timing isn't right, but if it's meant to happen it will.

Love it! And you mentioned my favourite tennis player Nadal!

A very interesting take on Tezuka and Echizen relationship!! This one shot shows the reality of relationships that no one is willing to wait for thier only one forever but at the same time it shows the level of devotion you do have for your only one. Did that make sense at all? LOL

I just love how no matter who Tezuka dates Echizen is his number one!! :)

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