Brilliant! *clap clap clap
You had me going there for a moment.
It isn't just two choices in this world, huh?

Nope! It's either your alive or your dead, HELL NO!

You can also be put into a coma,

I will remember that...

Thanks again for this fun ride, I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I'm surprised that you made me actually accept Sasuke and Sakura, those two have been hard for me.
With the moments of the rape plots, I kept thinking of this song
The Bed Intruder Song by ANTOINE DODSON

He's climbin in your windows

He's snatchin your people up

Tryna rape em so y'all need to

Hide your kids, Hide your wife

Hide your kids, Hide your wife

Hide your kids, Hide your wife

and hide your husband

Cuz they're rapin errbody out here

You don't have to come and confess

We're lookin for you

We gon find you

We gon find you

So you can run and tell that,

Run and tell that

Run and tell that, homeboy

Home, home, homeboy

We got your t-shirt

You done left fingerprints and all

You are so dumb

Rou are really dumb-for real From: .
The man got away leaving behind evidence

I was attacked by some idiot in the projects

So dumb, So dumb, So dumb, So

He's climbin in your windows

He's snatchin your people up

Tryna rape em so y'all need to

Hide your kids, Hide your wife

Hide your kids, Hide your wife

Hide your kids, Hide your wife

and hide your husband

Cuz they're rapin errbody out here

You don't have to come and confess

We're lookin for you

We gon find you

We gon find you

So you can run and tell that,

Run and tell that

Run and tell that, homeboy

Home, home, homeboy
Maaaannn That was good

Thanks)

HELL YA! I love how you have incorporated different artists songs into your fanfiction. That is GENIUS! Especially when you have chosen and effectively used the lyrics to your advantage.
Also, I am so freaking thrilled to know that you have chosen the top of my favorite songs in your story! I kept changing my iPod songs to match yours and sing along (corny maybe, awesome HELLYA!
as if I were at the concert. It was so magical. I had front row seats
Now, to continue to Chapter 13*clapping* Yay

Thanks)

I loved this story, I was listening to the song at the same time it was awsome You had a wonderfull idea and you wrote beautifully thanks for the story

This was suspensieful {i spelled it wrong sorry} I love it you are very talented

ima be honest i thought two things
1: he was at a world tour
2: he died

I really thought those two things bisides that love the chapter

OK sooo... I loved the story I read it straight through I just couldn't stop until I finished it! It was really good though I didn't like the ending! I thought he was dead which made me really sad and mad and then when I realized he had been in a coma then I was just pissed that after everything he went through he also missed all that time with his daughter! That being said...I LOVED IT!)

I was about to cry... I love Naruto When I read that part I had to put down my laptop to jump up and down!

OK I LOVE YOU SOO MUCH! You are amazing beyond words! You did have a few typos or messed up a word or two in the lyrics but I swear this is one of the best stories I've read in a while. Most of the time I read pointless smut but I'm a teenager what can I say? The songs you picked were definitely a nice touch I swear we probaly have the same playlists! There was only one band I had never hear of (within temptation which i will remedying shortly). And I am telling everyone I know on Fanfiction to read your story because this was simply stellar! The only part I wanted to see but didn't was the fight scene but I understand how difficult actual major scale fighting can be to write. Thank you for keeping with this and finishing it. You are awesome!

You eluded to one of my favorite songs earlier in the fic, with Naruto/Dai's daughter's name, Zoe Jane by Staind, and I'm disappointed that you didn't include it. I'm still gonna fave this story though.

I think this was an amazing story. I think it could have ended better then it did but It was still a great read.

one thing i'm dissappointed about is the lack of song listings. at the begenning or end of the chapter that has songs in it you should've at least put the name of the song as well as the artist, not everyone knows these songs. it was a little hard for me to figure out which artist did the criminal song due to your lack of listing the artist before or after the chapter ended. next time you write a story that has songs in it make sure you clairify that beforehand.

hahaha...i really laughed at this final chapter(?
well, for starters, while reading the whole fic, i was on the edge and wanted to review, waiting for some disclaimer about the songs..hahaha..really..xDD

anyways...i love the fic...

after all this time searching for a fic with the same plot in my mind,...i was really happy...

and there i was itching to write the story with the same plot!..hahah..

glad i had to read this..(or i would have suffered criticism about originality or somethingxD
your style writing this fic was really good, despite some minor mistakes about spellings and usage of words.

but overall..i loved the fic...

KEEP YOUR FICS COMING_

OMG... I cried as read this last chapter especially the wish that Zoe made but in my opinion the ending all together feels sort of empty, like there should be explanation of what happened, it also feels like you're leading into a sequel with some of the information just saying.

Please, please, please make a sequel for this! Im begging you! I cried in the end you know? When naruto woke up! And im reading this at 1:30 in the morning in my country! Please!

WoW really great story. It was slow in some parts but never boring, and that was an evil trick at the end. the only thing that I could see that would make this story better is if there was more. lol