|Reviews for Unintended Consequences|
| francis2 2/28/11 . chapter 1
Oh. This squeezed my heart, hard. Great great story!
| helbaffy 3/12/09 . chapter 1
That was so beautiful! :) Such a great oneshoot! :)
| RBJ12 7/30/08 . chapter 1
Wow...you did a great job with the story. I'm speechless...great job!
| Red-Sox-LaLa 7/22/08 . chapter 1
wow, beautifully written
| Vampire Reader 7/18/08 . chapter 1
Thank you for this very touching story. I'm glad I found it.
| moonlightfan44 7/15/08 . chapter 1
That was so sad! I cried. I can't believe their son had to leave when he was 10 to move in with his grandmother and then dies later on! So sad. Keep going if you want.
| Joanie 7/14/08 . chapter 1
That was beautiful. Really well written. Thank you for sharing.
| moonjat54 7/13/08 . chapter 1
Very well done. The true price of immortality is that you leave loved ones behind. And having a child be the one to lose is really sad. Especially since they had to leave him so early. It did sound like William had a long and happy life.
| vampirelover987 7/12/08 . chapter 1
Aw, This is so sad, made me cry! Great job :)
| elwren75 7/12/08 . chapter 1
How beautifully sad. Your writing is wonderful and painfully poignant. You've really brought up some issues that I think a lot of fans gloss over when the idea of Mick, Beth and children come up. I think there's a reason that, in most vampire lore, vampires can't have children. This is why. Great job.
| heavenlygrl 7/12/08 . chapter 1
Fantastic, just how I would picture it being; after all, somehow Mick and Beth would find a way to procreate!
| kschwaab 7/12/08 . chapter 1
how sad, but beautiful. poor Beth, there can be no pain greater than that of a mother having to bury her child.
| RandomTVFan30 7/12/08 . chapter 1
Great story. I loved your take on the theme.
| magialuna 7/12/08 . chapter 1
Very very sad, but beautiful and very well written. Thank you for sharing!
| p3karen 7/12/08 . chapter 1
That was so sad, but very well written.