lol...this wuz beautiful

Huh...never would have thought of that...total pregnant, is he like secretly a girlDid? Did he/she lie to everyone because he/she was a lezbo and fell for Akila? How did he/she even become pregnant if Akila is a girl? Is Akila also a he/she, or did Total two-time her. And everyone else? Huh...

Whoa.
So I was calmly eating a cough drop and surfing through FF, being all bored. And then. Stop. Death? We? EMO-NESS? Click.
Okay. Max dies. Great job. Fang dies. Uh...159?
Akila dies? Going great so far...Total dies...
PREGNANT!?
Whoa, whoa, whoa, what?
So...mwahahaha! Kudos to you! Have a cookie, wanna cookie? Hee hee!

-x-

Ahem, I mean...the story was really funny. There were several tiny mistakes. Such as, "Nudge, seeing Iggy aflame, tried to save him, but accidentally swallowed fire." The last fire should be replaced with "some fire". Right? RIGHT? -needs self-assurance-
-grabs Fang-
RIGHT?
-headflops-
Yup! The Great Fang has said so!
Great job.

made my day
:D

wow... I hope that you know this was the dumbest thing I ever read. And yet, it has that certain quality of stupidness that makes it slightly funny...

i hate you! you're stupid and dumb! why did you have to kill them all!? ;( ;0

you are a dumb, stupid, wit head of a person! I hate you!

*Tilts head to side* So this is your way of saying Save Fang didn't work, huh? Ah well, at least we tried...

oh my god, that was hilarious!!
i am laughing so hard i can barely think strait. straight, i mean.
see? your story is so funny i can't even type write. dang it, right.
lol
love this story!

:D
At first, I thought it was serious, and I was like "okay. Max died pretty quick" and then I kept reading and was like "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! HA!"
:D
Wow.
That was funny.
It inspired me to update my funny story
:D

Thanks!


-Peace to the outs
Kaila Nicole

Horrible and wonderful... Nah. Just plain funny! 10 stars! Wootz!

oh my GOD. THAT is the best FF I've read in AGES!
let me get this straight..
max- died from heart acctack from steriods
**- died fron overdoes of painkillers
Iggy- set himself on fire 'cause he loved fang
nudge-became mute and killed herself, who loved Max
gazzy- blew himself up including half o the world, who was in love with Iggy and Nudge... and missed beating angel up?
angel- killer herself 'casuse Total was dead
total- killed himself 'cause Alkia died
alkia - killer hersef 'cause she thought total died.


interesting... lol. I LOVED IT!

what the freakin hell!
THAT WAS HILARIOUS
Didn't make much sense, but it was great

Funny!

xD!
That was good. Really, really good.

Maybe this was what Jeb was telling us about the entire time. He was only keeping Max busy 'saving the world' so she couldn't take any steriods. It really would be saving the world.
It makes you wonder. xD
- AtES, with love