 Naito No Megami 2008-08-27 . chapter 5Omg that was awesome, I am an obvious Vizard fan myself and this fanfiction isnt that bad in my POV.. Hm.. I wonder how Kurosaki would react if he saw her powers and that fact that she was a Vizard.. Interesting.. UPDATE SOON! ^-^
~Sahara-Sama |
 AisuHime 2008-08-04 . chapter 5yeah, that sounds like Szayel. Be careful not to make Satsuki too strong, or she might come off as mary-sueish. Good work, I look forward to more. |
 AisuHime 2008-08-04 . chapter 4Szayel?! That sounds bad, given his personality. How exciting. |
 nellchan0013 2008-07-29 . chapter 5Have you ever noticed in movies when something extreme happens, no one's there or the cops take forever or never to show up? XD That was random I know...I just had to say it...XD *clears throat* This story is really good. Szayel wasn't out of character, and the explanations were well done. ^.^ |
 nellchan0013 2008-07-17 . chapter 4Oh, flip a coin! XD That's my suggestion. Yeah, it's a crappy suggestion, but oh well! I love your character! Oh my gosh, especially her attitude..reminds me of my OC a bit...lols...anyway in one of the earlier chapters, the girl who's name was 'Kari', was her full name Hikari? Anyways, good story |
 Souzou the Insane 2008-07-13 . chapter 3I actually like this story. It's taken a hold of my interest >.< I want to read more! |
 Buri-kun 2008-07-13 . chapter 3 M...So she'll meet Ichigo? The reasons for why specifically Karakura would be nice. I sense a conspiracy. Is that right? Sounds intriguing so far, i guess. |
 AisuHime 2008-07-13 . chapter 3Another great chapter! I'm really enjoying reading your fic. |
 AisuHime 2008-07-12 . chapter 2Interesing chapter. Is she a vizard, perhaps? Please update soon. |
 AisuHime 2008-07-12 . chapter 1A nice foundation for a great story! I look forward to more. |