 SailorCelestia 2009-05-20 . chapter 4I hope you update soon. This is getting good! |
 Sara 2008-10-09 . chapter 4 Oh, please make another chappy...Catrina and Rep are, like my favorite favorite characters, but I LOVE your characters, and the way you write too. I've read a few of your other stories, you've really got talent. Please update, though? |
 tebrighteyes 2008-09-28 . chapter 4Thanks for the quick update! aw... poor angel and I loved Spicy. This story is getting better and better with each chapter if that's even possible. Can't wait for the rest. |
 Katie 2008-09-27 . chapter 4 This looks to be really good. I can't wait to see where it goes. |
 Sparkler 2008-08-29 . chapter 4OMG I've been meaning to review this for forever!! Angel's story is so intriguing! O_O I can't wait to see what happens next! |
 tebrighteyes 2008-08-01 . chapter 3Yes! I'm so glad you're writing again! I love this story and I find my self holding my breath with each chapter. You really know how to capture the feel of my little pony and all the suspense it just awesome. And Catrina is back! I always loved her. I always knew that good guy act was too good to be true. Please update soon. |
 Natsu chan 2008-07-25 . chapter 3Hi LM! Well I did intend to do this over a week ago but time rather got away from me but on to more important things. I love your fic, it's very well written and the ponies still come across with that odd combination of human a pony character. It works well. You've obviously edited and checked your fic before posting which is a rarity here and it shows. The only thing I can pick at is this line:
"A giant cat. A giant cat lady."
The second sentence is confusing. Is it a female cat or a lady who looks like a cat? Really though that’s nitpicking. So far so good it's a lovely well written, fun and captivating fic. Great work. |