OMG! That was really, really good! But, u said that this is not the end? So will he get his body back after all? I hope every body lives... I hate it when good guys die... But, I look forawd 2 ur other stories! N, just 2 let u know, I'm putt'n u in my favs!

Cookiesama!

Nida! *wail*

A near-masterpiece story marred by an unhealthy high-speed pace and a few other inconsistencies. Don't get me wrong, it's great! But I know you can do much better than this.

fucking amazing i am hooked!

i like it, alot but i think you need to add more. it went too fast. please keep up the good work, i'll look out for the next one!

Wow, that was pretty good! Your past events makes sense in the timeline, while Laguna and Ellone were away, Raine never died but had a visit from Adel! I'll have to read the next part!

I LOVE this story! Final Fantasy and horror! My two favorite things! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hey...will Seifer make an appeariance? Just wondering. *covers eyes* please dont let Squall or Zell die.)

ACK! You can't leave it there! You must write more! *whimpers* poor Squall...

I had to laugh in chapter 2 when you said that red and black were the colors of vengeance and death. That's my high school's colors, lol. I like the colors actually, but continue with the story.

continue continue continue CONTINUE!

C'MON WRITE MORE, PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

This was another skillfully written story. I have really enjoyed your writings; the dark stories seem to perfect for the current season. If that was your first attempt at horror, you succeeded brilliantly. It is nice to know that someone else is writing a dark fic out there, for a while I thought I was the only one! Please continue soon, your work is exquisite

really cool story, but come on! Im on the edge of my seat!)

PLEASE Continue! It is awesome! I love Squall torture/angst/squinoa stuff! For all of us! Continue

Definitely continue! I wonder, what happened to make Squall like this? I'm excitedly waiting for the next chapters.