Please update, I just came across this story, and I love what you've began with. Other stories don't seem to catch my interest because Thirteen and Cuddy seem off, but not this one.

Interesting start, and I'm looking forward to see where you take this next!

Awsome, you should totaly keep going

Loved this first chapter. This story has a lot of potential. I wish you would continue it. PMS

Nice ;)

Hey, great start; I like it a lot. I really like your descriptive passages, they paint a really nice picture.

I like how slowly this is starting off; more realistic than if they got involved very quickly.

Overall, I really liked it. Great intro, can't wait to see where it's going.

I'd definitely read if you update. ;)

this was a good start.
im interested to see where its going to lead..
i think you should keep going :)

Interesting... I don't think I've seen this pairing before. I look forward to reading future chapters.

-L

Lovely descriptions and very well written. Interested to see where this will go. Adding you to the House Femslash Archive- w.fanfiction. net/community/House_Femslash/59311/
Femslash does have a smaller readership, but we're very loyal :).
Cate.

Hey,

This is great. It must be the first fanfic I've read in several weeks written by someone who seems to grasp the concept of both grammar and plot. I also read your parody, hilarious, and very justified: it's not even ridiculous because there are a lot of fanfics that sound exactly like that.
Overall, I commend you. The language is structured and appropriate, there's actually description (which is very unusual for a fanfic) and the characters seem credible. Impressive. I'm looking forward to chapter two.

All the best,

Liza.

This is such an interesting pairing... I'm intrigued as to where it will go! Some really nice descriptive bits in there, especially towards the beginning. I'm looking forward to Chapter 2!