Gosh, kinda freaky...

But... interesting and nice ?

Very different.

I like this.

Well written and colourful choice of words.

Still has me thinking about it...

xoxo

beautiful. really beautiful. love the way you write.

and sheppard is a hero again:Xyay!

i wish this scene really happened... :( so he could find her and bring her back to atlantis.

Awesome! Great word imagery!

Nice job! I love your descriptions.

random. k. i think i like.

OMG "The green had a face she recognised; hair as black as the night and lips that mouthed something she should understand, a distant echoing accompanying the movement. Some of it broke through.: That is so swet and cute! YAY for madness and insanity, it rules! and so does Sparky! Great fic! :D

Skys**:)

well, well, well. What is happening to Elizabeth? Am I missing something?

Yay, John to the rescue.

oh gosh. i loved how you wrote that. seemed very intense. Nice job.