This is very good, is it still being written?

this is good cant wait for the rest!

good start... can't wait for you to continue...

I got lazy and didn't feel like logging in. ^_^
I love to concept of the story. So far it's good! You're an awesome writer. Update soon, you have my attention!

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you should have mary talk to Marshall about what hapend

I like how you're doing this. i can't wait to see the rest

Loved it. If they had shown Marshall's recovery on the show, I believe it would have been along these lines. Loved the interaction between Mary and Marshall. Definitely prefer those two together...

Please update soon!!

This seems very interesting.
It was very well written.
I look foward to the next one.

This is a really interesting start, but can't tell where this is going yet. Looking forward to the next installment.