 Wolfofsherwood 2009-02-28 . chapter 30Aw... You haven't updated in forever. This chappie was great, but I want the next one to come out... *big puppy eyes* |
 MizzAKA 2009-02-20 . chapter 30Please update soon! I need to know about the last clue! love the story! |
 dbzparty 2009-02-13 . chapter 30 more soon. like now. it's been 3 days of reading and you stop here. HELP! |
 SaveADrumBangADrummer23 2009-01-03 . chapter 30Kukuku. Seriously, hilarious-beautiful-awesome-fantastic-lovely-romantic-sad-tragic-and-any-other-word-you -can-think-of-to-describe-this-wonderful-story story!
That one chick, the beekeeper's daughter? Her name... ah damn, everytime I looked at it I read it as 'Scumbag'. How's that for ironic?
And I love your author's notes! At the top? Especially the random ones, such as the bug-eating Shika and the Shibi incident. Damn I have so much more to compliment you on but I need some fucking sleep dammit.
All i can say before I pass out is this: This has to be one of the most fantasticly written stories I have ever read. I could never read a JuuHana fic and have it actually make sense. And all these couples, and all the shit going on... you obviously have an amazing talent. Hell, I love it so much I won't even press you to update!
You are gonna, right? it's not finished yet, is it? |
 bored spitless 2009-01-02 . chapter 1hi. i've read this whole story and i want more of it. if you ended it and ddin't tell me... i'm going to cry. his is a very good stroy and you should continue it and hopefully more will be up soon. please. |
 Baby Cougar 2008-11-19 . chapter 30I must tell you, I don't usually give ShinoxKiba stories the time of day, let alone read them. Something about the summary and title attracted me to the story, but i didn't think that I would continue after the first chapter. I am happy to tell you that I have read all thirty and am anxiously awaiting the next. Great job. I hope Shino admits his feelings to Kiba soon. |
 Baby Cougar 2008-11-18 . chapter 15for some reason that second-to-last line reminded me of the quote
"it's 106 miles to Chicago. We have a full tank of gas, half a pach of ciggarrettes, it's dark, and we're wearing sunglasses. Hit it." |
 Baby Cougar 2008-11-18 . chapter 12I love the conversation aboout tentens "cat" |
 Baby Cougar 2008-11-18 . chapter 4Shika the badass ruffian. I like it. Is Shino OCD? I can totally see that. |
 earthbender068 2008-11-18 . chapter 30what fufilling chapter, and it's weird b/c it didn't even have the main characters in it! so hanabi is awesome. i don't think hiashi will ever get it. i agree with her, if he leaves that company to hinata it won't last & all his hard work would be for nothing. not that i think hinata isn't intelligent. it's just if she can't stand up to her dad, how will she be able to stand up to the aggressive people in the business world that don't give a flying flip about her. at least her father does love her. i mean i know she's chosen this life with the blond bomber, but she should know enough that it's a mistake.
and shikamaru answering the phone...lol. a phone call, which started all this mess for kiba and shino, once again screws with someone's life. and good for sakura trying to help someone else. i mean she got the ball rolling with shino and kiba, so maybe she can do the same with tenten and shikamaru & chouji and hinata. and what's up with her an kankuro? i mean she's seriously trying to help three other couples, but yet still playing a game with him? come on sakura, you're better than that.
and so enter kin and zaku...random people, but i have a feeling zaku will be back. crap.
so neji got sasuke out for a little night of dancing...that had to be a sight. and whiskers seems to like neji. that's a good sign and sasuke once again like the manga/anime is too stupid to see he has someone right in front of him that can love him. big dummy.
it also seems that sakura and tenten's relationship is on the mend. that is good b/c poor tenten needs someone. yes i know she has haku, but sarkura is her bff and that's truly an important relationship. as on edge as tenten is, she needs some balance.
and i missed dei and sasori in this chapter! what are they up to? have they finally decided to move in together? how i miss them.
can't wait for the next update. and to find out if hana has finally finished the wash.
terri. |
 jazzy2may 2008-11-12 . chapter 30Yay Sakura and TenTen. :D |
 T. A. Raskelt 2008-11-11 . chapter 30AH! What happened to shino and Kiba?! |
 earthbender068 2008-10-26 . chapter 29so this chapter was more about family relations than anything else. sakon and ukon, kim and his mom, then shino and shibi.
tsume i must say is a genius. yes, the clue did help kiba and ukon, but more importantly, it gave sakon the break through he needed. he could admit his feelings for the first time to ukon and it moved the pair forward. i can understand ukon's desparation. who wouldn't when they had someone they loved like that. this is his brother, his family of course he'd be up in arms.
shino admited his own distance from his father. and it's funny how one had such a good relationship w/his dad, but can't open up. yet there is the other who had a bad relationship w/his dad but is open and free. poor kiba thinking he would get a confession of attraction, but it shino talked about his dad instead. that was important though. shino already knows so much about kiba, it's kiba's turn to learn about this man. loved the line about 'what do you want to do now...you, walk akamaru..'
it seems kiba is going to enjoy teasing shino to no end, isn't he? and i loved kim's book idea! speaking of kim, his mom is finally letting him know he's an adult. maybe it's something that she's always known but kim's never noticed. i wonder if he's not too scared to leave home and is using illness more as a excuse. hmm...
i love having a jealous shino. and i've missed you! i was starting to get worried. now my review is acting all weird...so i guess it's time to end this.
terri |
 Crazy_Kibsy 2008-10-25 . chapter 29 Gah cliffhanger!
T.T What has Hana done? |
 KatSin 2008-10-24 . chapter 29oh no... what did she do?!? |