i loved this story but i did love akito and Shigure's the best! i love those two!

not bad, were they all haikus? they were pretty good, jc.

Oh boo, they are all over, there are so many other furuba characters. Ah well. You can try inuyasha haikus, or naruto haikus, though my friend and nee-chan frescapower did naruto haikus, they are good, but I would like to read what kind of haikus you could do.

aw. this is my fav one. this is based on thee anime right? well, if you don't want it to end you could do:

rin, kureno, uo, hana, yuki fan club, machi, manabe, kimi, nao and akito's mom. but yeah. niice job all in all (;

(; NICE.

lol, yeah. i think his fav word is gomen!

now that i think abt it, they would make good sisters.

lol. pocky rocks. and so does these poems.

yes he is very unpredictable. loved that line

aha, well hiro isn't that MYSTERIOUS. but he is at times (; hehe, no worries. i'm here and i'm lovin it.

again, good job and you really portray kisa here.

ahah, i love thee last line. sorry, i've been studying for finals coming up so yeah. i'll get to your other stories when i have time.

haha, this really suits ayame.

Bo, last haiku next chapter, they are really good, what about the people outside of the sohmas?

i like these poems but u are forgetting 2 of the sohmas kureno and rin but anyways it is great