Haha, im the middle it was like "this is a romance story WTF r u doing here toph!" but it very hilarious

This made me cry.
So, so amazing.

PSH, if a bus ran over THIS (!) then I'd wish for a dream-crushing bus anyday. But anyways, I thought it was very heartwarming and beautifully written.

I really liked it!
To cute!

Cute!

*laughing* If that's your brain gone soft you must be a super-genius! XD

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in conclusion you are a zutara
godess thanks for playing -dies-

i love this so hard. so very. very hard.
of course joor descrip was amazing - but
toph in this owns and LOLZ. THE ENDING.

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XD Well I have to admit that I got confused on some parts. It is still a nice oneshot nonetheless =D

... HOW DARE YOU?!?! HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT TO ME?!?!

*dies* How am I supposed to feel when my epic-wifey Suki, who, btw, is a billion times better at writing than I, hates this amazing piece?! YOU JUST DESTROYED EVERYTHING I HAVE WORKED TO PUBLISH! ... This is amazing, and I can't believe you hate it. You're Zuko and Toph are, hands down, your best Avatarverse characters-you write them so beautifully, Suki, without taking them out of context in the least.

This was just so full of win that I can't give you an amazing review to match. You'll grow to love this oneshot though, trust me. BUMAI ftw. Also, WE ARE SUCH AVATARDS.

- courtney (fav'd)

I don't think it got run over by a bus! I think it was really good!

I liked the idea that it was centered on Katara pining over Zuko, not the other way around. It suited better with your writing style.

What's crazy was that while reading the part of the turtle dugs diving for food, I swear I head ducks squacking. But they're not out at this time of day. You made me get so into the story I started imagining the sounds to realistically! =D

Amazing job, and I look forward to your final entry for Zutara Week tomorrow!!