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Taeniaea
2009-11-07 . chapter 34
good chap
Taeniaea
2009-10-11 . chapter 33
cool story
Taeniaea
2009-07-14 . chapter 27
Great Chapter
Taeniaea
2009-06-28 . chapter 26
great story
ryu
2009-06-25 . chapter 25
awesome story~i enjoy reading it~^^
update soon~
Taeniaea
2009-06-13 . chapter 24
great story
ClinicallyInsaneAndDangerous
2009-06-06 . chapter 23
Damn... They are SO screwed!!
Taeniaea
2009-06-04 . chapter 22
great story
RaveMasterShinobi
2009-06-01 . chapter 17
Sweet Yggdrasil...! O.O AWESOME STORY! I can't believe you only have 8 reviews and you have like 20 chapters! Everything you did: adding characters from past Digimon universes! GENIUS~! Although, I'm wondering something:

During Savers when Masaru, Tohma and Yoshino faced the Bio-Hybrids, the Hybrids were defeated and the Digi-Eggs of the Digimon they were fused to separated from their bodies. Can't Hawkmon and V-mon be separated from Chika and Relena (In Digi-Egg form, obviously) if they were beaten with a strong enough attack?

e.g. Tohma vs. Nanami: MirageGaogamon used Full Moon Blaster at ground zero and the egg of the Digimon Nanami was fused with left her body. Same thing with Masaru v. Kouki and Yoshino v. Ivan. The Digi-Eggs left their bodies and they were human again. Just wondering if that applies to you. Sorry for the long ass review ^^;

Keep writing,

RMS

PS: Wow, Relena REALLY went off the deep end, Chika's sorta messed up in the head, Ruki is still kick-ass, Tsukaimon to a viral MetalGreymon?! Different, but cool! ^^ I hope he evolves into, like, Gaioumon or BlackWarGreymon or something O.O
markrock18
2008-11-30 . chapter 15
where has Masaru been for all these years?
JapanManiac
2008-10-01 . chapter 11
Thats discrimination! Chika did the right thing since Franz is going too far and they hate her for it?! Yuka didn't hate Relena for trying to ill Chika while Chika kill Franz to defend herself!
Olaf74
2008-09-24 . chapter 10
I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
nyc2dragon
2008-09-16 . chapter 9
A sequel Savers with the younger characters. I always wanted to see a story like that,I think they all have protentional and you are realising them.

One suggestion, did you see episode 42 of Savers?, I hope you find the time to include the circumstances surronding Relena's birth. I would think Relena would always feel guilty about that and think of herself as the one that killed her mother.
ClinicallyInsaneAndDangerous
2008-09-16 . chapter 9
I was expecting Varodurumon if any thing to be their jogress form... AWSOME none the less! :)
ClinicallyInsaneAndDangerous
2008-09-07 . chapter 8
COOL!! But how con Piyomo n still be alive then? ...NO WAY!! THAT'S HAWKMON! *feints*
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