Uwaaaaaaah this made me cry! Jareth loves her so much!

Well, usually the fics you like least turn out to be good. I thought it was pretty good, and I liked that whole symbolism at the end. I'm a sucker for the cliches. XD But, I don't know, reading something like this with the same premise actually never gets old. I loved reading this.

This was lovely. It's the first of your work I've read...I'm very interested to read more. I loved that Sarah kissed him first for a change LOL. And Jareth was really quite sweet.

So sweet.

any chance for a sequel?

My favorite Labyrinth oneshot of all time. Seriously.

I didn't spot any grammer errors, everything flowed, and the characters were in character.

"Jareth could almost feel his heart breaking. He couldn’t even look at her anymore for he feared that he would start crying."

Ugh. I hate you. Thanks for making me cry here. I seriously felt my own heart breaking. Beautiful wording here! I could feel Jareth's pain! You showed me he was in pain, instead of just telling.

-Bitter Farewell

Oh, cute! Yes, I think I like this one MUCH more than The Queen. It would be nice to her that she did, indeed, go back several years later. This is more like a start and the song is kinda something of a middle but not much of an end. Anyhoo, I really liked this one. I'd tell you to update, but this is a one-shot, so what good would that do? Oh well, you have a good one!

Aww! This is soo sweet!

I'd love to read the sequal if there is one!

Beautiful!

XxoxX

OMG! That was absolutly beautiful! You should really really do a sequel to this...please please. And the inspirational song you used is one of my favorites(i love the goo goo dolls). Wonderfully done, kudos!

excellent work! I loved this!

If only this could've happened...

Good Job.

I was wondering when that song would show up in the text, it was simply saved until the end. I caught a typo or two so make sure to double check even after spell check. This story is all right, not extraordinary and it is above mediocre. I think you can exceed this but I just don't necessarily know how. That is why I do the reviewing and not the writing.

ARE YOU DaFT? THIS IS NOTHING CLOSE TO COMPLETE, AND I DEMAND YOU WRITE ME A SEQUEL BEFORE I KILL THE AUTHOR, DAMN YOU!

Cute. I like that ending much better than what we got. So much more promise! Thanks for sharing this, I enjoyed it (and I lurve the GooGoo Dolls)!

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I enjoyed it! And it's a good song too, haha! :D