WOW! I never saw the Jack/Jason coming, but I like it. I really like this story, cause I love all mythology. Please update soon :D

Hey I finnaly got around to reading your fan fics, and I am extremly parcial on HSM and i just want to let you know that this story is absolutly amazing! As i was reading Lyudi-Invalidy i was singing along with it. I love t.A.T.u The girls are phenomal. At first i didnt quite get the song until it got to the chorus. Once it got to that point i knew excatly what it was. And the best part was that as I was singing it i got most of the pronounciations correct. Update soon! please!

OMFG this was the most interesting story ive ever read. i luv how u work both norse and greek mythology into this. i dnt no that much about norse mythology but i do no a lot about greek and i am loving wat u have so far. although some of it is a little confusing and btw GRAMMAR TIP-idk if ur a native english speaker/ writer or not but wen u pluralize something, U DONT USE AN APOSTROPHE! for example- it would be, in one of the last sentences- "in slow undulating movements" not "movement's" just PLZ fix that for the next chapter and everything will be great. Also, TROY HAS A 13 INCHER HOLY FUCK! lol. i want it!

I LOVED IT! You have to updated I want to know what is going to happen to Troy and Ryan please...

Again I loved it please update soon.
Talk to you later

Dalton

Do not put an apostrophe on every word that ends in an s. You need to look back into basic grammar and spelling before you continue.

I really like this story. This is the first HSM fanfiction i've actually read. I read HP FF all the time.

Cant wait till you update hope its soon!

Great first chapter I cant wait to see what happens to Troy, although your seconded chapter seems to be from the Harry Potter universe, hope that you fix this and update the real next chapter

omg! very original! luffed it so much keep it up! kant wait to see more.

will you please update?

this is a realy good story I hope you update soon

Really good start. Very interesting I really like it!!