aw this is so touching :.) a very good idea you had there :D i'd like to see baralai praying to the fayth^^ and i'd like to see gippal kick its ass for refusing to join baralai XD nice fic :)

Aw man. I could feel his hurt as I read this. This is a wonderful story and I'm glad that I read it.

I've always figured that if Baralai were a summoner, he wouldn't make it to the final summoning.

I think that your final note is very much correct. :3

And I think that you should write an AU fanfic in which it happens! :o Or even a round-robin partner sort of thing, because that would be an incredible story. I'd want to write it, but my attention span is too short for a multi-chaptered story. ^^;

Nice piece. I thought it was very in-character.

~Galenchia

Even though I don't know these characters, or anything about the game and it's plot...I enjoyed this, and it was much more than just the typical emo manlove fic.
8D
Everyone else should read it, and give her better reviews than this lame one!

Oh that was uber cute! Poor Baralai, but at least Gippal was there to make him feel better! I enjoyed this- thank you for sharing it!

You're right - Baralai's part was a bit overdone. But it got the point across, andit was a really sweet (as in aww) fic. Great job. ^_^