I don't know, you kinda just wrote the end of the movie but with the two still alive. I mean the monster did get up and we don't know what happened. You definetely need to go on otherwise it isn't much of a story. Almost a rewrite...

I did like the way that you were writing though. I think it has great flow and the descriptions are good without being extremely long. Keep it up!

Interesting so far. I like how you jump right into the action, hope to see this shape out well!

Can't wait for more!