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LightsDarkChild
2009-03-24 . chapter 38
Yay! Sorry itstaken me soo long to reveiw. Itss been work work work and more work. ANyways I truely liked this story and I absolutly loved it.

n.n

- One sleep depraved RyverOwl
Katie
2009-02-14 . chapter 38
This was a really great story! I really enjoyed reading it.
Haissan
2009-01-24 . chapter 38
You should be proud of this literary work.
Fenikkusuken
2009-01-08 . chapter 38
*happy, contented sigh*

*applauds*

I was able to read both of the final chapters of this marvelous fic in one sitting this morning and thoroughly enjoyed how you creatively and neatly knitted all the plot threads into a vivid word tapestry.

Thank you SO much and congratulations!
ninjawitch93
2008-12-31 . chapter 34
I'm very glad to hear your trip to Japan was good! I missed your story so much while I was with out internet and I'm on my way to read more of it now. I'm utterly jelous you go to go to Japan, I'd like to go there one day myself. If you have the time I'd love to hear more about your time there.
Well, I'm off to read more--squee!--this chapter was so good. I'm itching for the next!
Amazing work!
~Rin
Raganui
2008-12-31 . chapter 38
Well, this story has been very interesting. You could totally make Full Metal continuation to tell of their journey back to Amestris and maybe even go on from there into other stories. Don't think that you could pull off any more for Inu, it's pretty well ended. I do enjoy the double time loop. Souta changes things to be what Kagome knows and she is required to change the past so that Souta can change it, which eventually leads to her... yea, you get the picture.

Anyways, there were definitely times in which I almost thought I could picture the artists and story tellers for FMA and Inu actually making this. It'd be one interesting movie.

I look forward to more stories, good luck in your future writings.
DemonRaily
2008-12-30 . chapter 38
Yay, a happy ending ^_^
Sakura Lisel
2008-12-30 . chapter 36
What does Kikyou mean by that Kagome will never be born if KIKYOU'S soul was still stuck in the clay body?? If Kagome was never going to be born, then she would have ceased to exist by now. *lol* Not only that, why would Kikyou's part of the soul was already reincarnated, seeing how it was STOLEN from Kagome by that demoness in order to fully revive the newly created clay body. The only thing that should happen is that Kikyou's half of KAGOME'S soul should automatically return to it's proper reincarnated flesh and blood body as soon as Kikyou 'dies' again.
DemonRaily
2008-12-28 . chapter 37
Nice ^_^
You did a great job whit the story ^_^
I'll be wating for the epilogue then ^_^
kokoronagomu
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
i swear i have added so many stories to my favorites just by trying to review. although this one was going into my favorites anyway.

()just sneaking in here-- pillaging your favorites.

>=)

ginny
kinky-kitsune
2008-12-27 . chapter 37
aw this chapter was so cute, especially the ending! Can't wait for the Epilogue! Hey is it gonna be about Ed and Al?
kinky-kitsune
2008-12-18 . chapter 36
oh no!! then that bastard might get ahold of Inuyasha! well update! OMG, that was depressing... like i just saw 'Marley and Me' and then read this... wow today is just depressing. Well update again soon!
LightsDarkChild
2008-12-18 . chapter 36
T-T Good chapter. I feel a tad sad for Inuyasha but it was one or the other.
Fenikkusuken
2008-12-16 . chapter 36
Simply outstanding.

"After all, are we not fortunate beyond all others, in that we know, without a doubt, that our souls will be reunited? Kagome is my rival, my hope, my proof."

Beautifully put. Thank you.
DemonRaily
2008-12-16 . chapter 36
so sad T.T
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