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Liastra Lee
2009-05-15 . chapter 5
Grats for the best use of a Fry and Laurie sketch ever. Just had to say it before I forgot.

Oh and I love this story and all of the one shots.

Claudia is awesome here and I love that she becomes friends with Nadine against her will.
poeticgrace
2008-12-31 . chapter 13
I loved this story and all the others. Thanks for introducing me to the idea of these two. Johnny and Nadine...if only.
jess
2008-12-31 . chapter 13
now you have to write a story about amelia and jake falling in love particuarilly when amelia is like 21 or older and just returned from school or something. Love this series hope you continue to write and thanks
JohnnyClaudiaZ7
2008-12-30 . chapter 13
thanks so much for writing this! i loved all of the right girl and the one shots!:)
awtr101fan
2008-12-30 . chapter 13
this was such a funny & cutesy chapter. i luved the part about baby amelia & the ice cream. so adorable.

i'm kind of sad 2 c this 1 go. is there gonna b a story about amelia all grown up or nething like that in the works? or maybe another jona fic? let me know. i'll b glad 2 read it. til then, happy riting & happy new year :)
poeticgrace
2008-12-29 . chapter 12
As cute as ever - so in character for both Claudia and Nadine. I love their dynamic, especially with the baby thrown in there. Awesome.
awtr101fan
2008-12-27 . chapter 12
this chapter was way 2 funny! i luved the way nadine was gong on & on & the way claudia snapped. hilarious. but i really luved the ending w/ claudia & johnny. 2 hilarious :) can't wait 4 more.

-erica
Candymen
2008-12-27 . chapter 11
And Amalia is born! Great one shot Huma. Johnny and Nadine are too cute and are in for a whole lot of trouble. hehe
Great update
Candymen
2008-12-27 . chapter 10
You gotta love that Claudia/Johnny interaction. This is too funny.
awtr101fan
2008-12-26 . chapter 11
dang. that sounded kind of mean of claudia 2 tell nadine & johnny. but it would b kind of funny if little amelia looked just like her. but w/ nadine's personality. will there b nemore 1-shots? or another jona story? i maybe a nikodine fan but i still luv reading jona. who knows, maybe 1 day i'll completely change my mind & switch camps. it all depends on whether or not i ever c them onscreen 2gether. newayz keep ut the great riting :)

-erica
luvinforeva
2008-12-25 . chapter 11
I loved it, absolutely amazing, especially that last chapter. Your AMAZING. I loved the end when Claudia said the baby was going to be a dead ringer for her and Johnny and Nadine's reaction.

Love, love, love your Claudia
JohnnyClaudiaZ7
2008-12-25 . chapter 11
haha that last line was great. me and my aunt are exactly the same way lol
beanybabe324
2008-11-26 . chapter 9
I absolutely love these one shots. When are you going to update with one that has the baby. Pls make it soon.
poeticgrace
2008-09-18 . chapter 9
A strange combination of hot, sweet and cute - rare that someone can invoke such an arrange of emotions in a story.
IlovetowriteSMP
2008-09-18 . chapter 9
Pretty funny.
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