 delusionment 2009-08-26 . chapter 8Aww! I love this story! It's cute, it's adorable, it's sweet! I love that you capture everyone's personality perfectly. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
 The Sora-muffin 2009-08-12 . chapter 8Update soon, please! I love the story and plot so far, and it would be a shame if you decided to stop right here :)
~Sora |
 jarell88 2009-07-06 . chapter 8A very well written work in progress. (At least, i hope it's still in progress... gief moar plox.)
What distinguishes this from the myrad of other klema fics is how you depict your characters. Too many fictions depict Klavier just being too much of a jerk, in my opinion, as well as overusing the whole german phrases thing. Yours, however, go out of the way to show their softer sides, even having Ema open up to Klavier about her past. The way they express aer for each other is also sweet, for example, Klavier getting a bag of snacks for Ema, or Ema's visible worry for Klavier when his brother was brought up.
Another thing is also how you didn't make this solely about klema. They remain the focus, yes, but you manage to blend the entire ace attorney universe in so well, with Ema's fangirlishness for Edgeworth, admiration for Phoenix, and the general interactions with the rest of the cast, that it actually seems like it's happening.
Anyway, great fic... hope to see more chapters in the future, please :D |
 Gavin Gal 2009-03-14 . chapter 8I love this story, it is very well written, and I love your interpretation of Klema :) |
 lazyguy90 2009-03-04 . chapter 8Sweet. Very glad to see and update. Fantastic! Keep it up. |
 haruka798 2009-03-04 . chapter 8AH! Loved this chapter so much. Hard to critique when I'm such a Klema dork; but I do like the interplay between the two of them. Especially Ema's vehement(and sometimes violent) denial of her attraction to him. |
 winner-loser 2009-03-04 . chapter 8Oh my God I thought you were never going to update so it was a super good surprise to see this story up again. I do love it so please update soon xD |
 Roseanni 2009-03-04 . chapter 8I read the whole fic till the last chapter and no! ;_; Oh, why does it have to end here? Aww, can't wait for the next chapter! |
 White Rosary 2009-02-06 . chapter 7^^;
Update?
Been about two months since the last one.. |
 sonicandlink 2008-12-30 . chapter 7Pretty good so far... Can't wait to read the rest... |
 winner-loser 2008-12-20 . chapter 7One of the best stories I've read in ages ^_^ update soon! |
 lazyguy90 2008-12-14 . chapter 7Very cool, keep at it! |
 kaito142 2008-12-12 . chapter 7Aww... why is it has to be Apollo? It would be nice if it's Klavier. |
 kaito142 2008-12-11 . chapter 6My fave pairs! I like this so uch! Please update soon! |
 lazyguy90 2008-12-02 . chapter 6This was one helluva chapter! Brilliant work as usual! It was very very cool having all these old characters appearing. Hope you update soon! Keep at it! |