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Guardoflight
2008-09-24 . chapter 1
Interesting and very creative, I hope the story will be entertaining, I was kinda expecting there to be no-curse in the fic. Pairing wise I think it should be Ranma x Akane or Kasumi as well as Ryoga x Ukyo.

I hope you add a new chapter soon
Dlikee
2008-09-15 . chapter 1
ranma kasumi, ranma kasumi, ranma kasumi (ok maybe ranma nabiki) oh and bash akane alittle not ott
tahu24
2008-07-27 . chapter 1
Very good story hope to read more soon
gaul1
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
interesting beginning
Quathis
2008-07-22 . chapter 1
An interesting start, fun to read with some good drama when Akane showed up. Looking forward to how this goes.
Celestial Indigo
2008-07-21 . chapter 1
Yes, Akane bashing. Let Aiko beat up Nerima's number 1 Martial Artist. I would love that. As for pairings...I will wait until you show your character development.

A hundred-year long war on Jade. Nice idea, but this MUST be expanded and explained more too.

Lookin' forward to your next chapter.
YMYRR
2008-07-18 . chapter 1
I like it, the story has a lot of potential; also i am glad that Ranma is cured, sincerely i am sick of the fics were they make Ramna stuck as a girl or abuse of the curse, so i am really a fan of the stories were Ranma found a cure.
Also, a am not an Akane fan, so please, make this fic an Akane bashing type.
I will be waiting for the next chapters.
Keep writing.
Redzorin
2008-07-16 . chapter 1
Nice freakin fanfic!
Martial Arts Master
2008-07-14 . chapter 1
You would love any suggestions? Well, I love the direction in which this fic is going, so here are my suggestions:

First, Aiko should be also taken to see Ranma's other fiancees, Ukyo and Shampoo, just to see how Aiko would perceive them (we now already know she doesn't like Akane). Plus, how would Aiko react if, as usual, Mousse, Ryoga, and Tatewaki Kuno attacked Ranma out of nowhere, or if that psycho Kodachi showed up and tried to forcibly seduce her father?

Perhaps, also, Ranma should explain why his past was such a mess to Aiko, what with all the unwanted fiancees and contracts and people out to kill him...oh, that gives me another idea; Aiko should punish Genma on Ranma's behalf, given that most of Ranma's problems are technically Genma's fault.
bigkyle990
2008-07-14 . chapter 1
Its a good start and i think Akana would deserve the bashing cause she the only anima character i think that earns it.
Adolthered
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
This story is interesting ! I voted for anybody but Akane ! Please update soon.
Diablo200030002002
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
Like the story and how it started, as for pairings.
I liek to see Kasumi and Ranam but alos Nabiki as well...maybe he coudl wind up with the both of them?

As for Akane well get a hard lesson from Ranma or his daughter, learn that she losted her chance due to her temper and behavior..maybe find some pianful closure and move on.
Warbender
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
Interesting start. That said. There really isn't enough story yet for me to form an honest opinion. Update this soon please.
Chi Vayne
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
It's been two years for everyone else, but obviously more for Ranma. From the little we've seen, Ranma appears to have matured. It's not clear how much if any Akane has, so she may not be ready for a family and raising a daughter not her own. Kasumi might be but she has never indicated any interest in Ranma, although now that he's older than her she may re-evaluate him as a prospect.
Jerry Unipeg
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Looking like a great story. I vote for Kasumi.
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