I know what happened, you just couldn't make a decision about who should be paired up with who so everyone gets to be with everyone, definitely makes for a fun and interesting group ;) I loved this story almost better than the original and how you ended it without any real defined roles, it seems to work well for these guys.^^ I wish this site allowed emails still because I would love to know if you were going to be working on another story, I guess I'll just have to keep an eye out :) It really was a great story and a wonderful read ^_^

I love it that you came back and made it all work out. I hadn't read this story for a while, but when I saw this in my inbox, I just started reading and instantly fell right back into the story. Very good.

I stumbled across this remix before I read Simply End.. Though I have read the other stories in your "Gossip Game" world. So I read the first 11 chapters of that, then switched over to Simply End Remix, because as much as I love KakaIru, I really wanted Genma and Iruka to find a way to be together in this. Especially, if the weird little monkey duo can keep Gen and Ruka from burning eachother out the way they did the first time.

Also, I really hope they can get Kakashi involved in their incestuous little "family" because he's way too lonely and isolated. Also, Happily Ever After does not HAVE to equal two people. I have a much dimmer view of polyamory in the real world, but I love it when it works in fiction. So anyway, that's how I hope this goes and I've enjoyed all the stories you've set in this 'verse. Keep up the good work.

wish there will be more about raidou and kakashi...i don't know why but i'm going all out for raidou...wish raidou and genma will get back together...stupid genma...i used to like iruka...but then in this story i think he is a total mess...don't like it very much...i'm also going for kakashi...poor raidou and kakashi...

It's interesting to see everyone trying to figure out their roles and where they stand with each other. Iruka seems to get the best end of the deal, he's pretty much getting everyone he wants, anyway he wants. It kind of made me sad to hear Genma saying to Kakashi that he really doesn't need or want to have someone else, it's like he's letting Iruka do whatever he wants but you begin to think he's not getting what he truly wants. But by the end of this last chapter it was nice to see how happy he was just to be with Iruka, hopefully in the end this relationship really does work for the two of them because I don't think they'll survive if they don't get this right the second time around. These boys just can't seem to do anything the easy way, I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

This was so cute *wipes tear*. I love love. Can't wait for you to write more. Did you finish Nano?

An update! *hugs* I'm doing Nanowrimo as well, good luck! This is an interesting turn of events, but in a way I'm beginning to see how this might all work out in my brain. I guess it means I'm changing, but I'm okay with that. Love is love is love is eternal, and like fire it can be spread without depleting the source. There's nothing wrong with loving people and sharing love with them. Haha yeah I've changed XD. Great chapter! I can't wait to read more.

You're hinting at things aren't you, I get some of them but I can't help but think that I'm going to be surprised by others. That being said I like how we're starting to see situations and relationships come together, even if there is still a lot that needs to be worked out. Another great chapter and as always I look forward to the next update :)
Oh yes, those tags that deposit naked wet men in my kichen, I'd like to order a crate! ;)

*headtilt* Who loves Kakashi? I feel like you revealed it in this chapter, but I still don't know... *thinks long and hard*. I loved the wrestling match that ended up in them tickling Iruka like crazy XD. That's always the best progression, pick on the ticklish people, haha. *hugs* I enjoyed this, and good luck writing the next chapter.

I don't know how you managed to fit it all into one chapter, but you did, small smile. It's good to see everything falling into place and their lives returning to some sense of normalcy, it just takes a while, but that's only to be expected. Thank you. I'll be eagerly waiting the rest when you get time :) Too braindead to give a good review, now, but I wanted to let you know I loved it.

Nice to see an update from you, it feels like it's been forever! Loved the chapter and not just because it has smut ;) but it was nice to see how connected and in sync Iruka and Genma are. It's actually starting to feel like a solid start to a relationship without all the wildly swinging emotions that had surrounded these two. I had been wondering about the emotions between these two and what was going to happen because in the past you had them so emotionally connected, which wasn't always a good thing.
Fabulous update, I'm almost a little disappointed that Kotetsu and Iruka didn't get a chance to fool around, it seems like poor tetsu keeps getting left out. Hope your going to be updating a little more regularly again because I can't wait to see the next chapter ^_^

"One must begin simply," ... *squeals* so cute! These two are so cute. Poor Kotetsu. I'm glad he mad ethe statement about making love with Izumo, it made me smile. Glad to see you're writing again! Have things been busy? School started three weeks ago, so I'm running around like crazy. Good luck on the next chapter, and just in life as well. Good to see you again.

Picturing Hinata blushing made me laugh so much XD. I think it would help Iruka to get to be close with Izumo and Kotetsu indefinitely. Iruka knows the emotions are different, and that's all Genma cares about I think. I'm glad it looks like Kakashi is going to find a place. Also, your mention of Yondaime almost made me cry! It definitely elicited an 'aww~'. I think Yondaime is watching over Kakashi and Naruto, and a few others as well. I can't wait to read the next chapter! (oh, and my vote is IruGen ^^)

i loved that "where do we go from here" scene. so much in fanfiction is about the intense, intense sex and intense love and all of those feelings at an extreme level. but usually, there is no tomorrow in these stories, it's all "and they lived happily ever after", and we have to assume that it'll always stay that way and it'll always be /good/ to be intense...

I LOVE Kotetsu's order at the end, XD. Go make me lunch, freeloader, *laughs*. Yes, I think it's good that they are very social and hang out with other people as well. When you lock yourself up with one person, you either lose all of your friends or you begin acting like a caged bird, or both. I'm excited to see what happens next!