That was really good...and very hot as well, it's too bad you didn't turn it into a series.
You know, that line "I think I would've gone insane if you hadn't moved here" reminded me of a fic called The moon's significant tremble (which is really good as well if you haven't read it)

Enjoyable read! A continuation would be nice, but it's lovely as is as well.

But one thing...
It's Never Lupus.

Great story...maybe you should continue it?
^_^

Just to let you know, Weather, I am American and yes, we actually do have monsoon rains. http://en./wiki/Monsoon#North_American_Monsoon

I just wanted to let you know that in America we have Hurricanes instead of Monsoons. Besides that really good.

Well...this was different yet one of the best stories I've read yet. I did read a few stories like yours, where they take a fantasy world and try and make it a reality, and it doesn't come out very well. But you did a great job. I'm sad that you won't continue the story, I would have like to know how the students would react. Not many kids are open to homosexuality this days.
Anyway, great job :)

hey hey! me again! miss nag! ...a couple more things to add. i feel like i'm being bossy and picky though. sorry.

-"the bartender actually walked over to them with a cranberry juice in his hand" and then says "hi, remus."

nicenicenice. i'd like to give a leetle beet of constructive critisism though. sorry if it sounds like i'm nagging. they're just suggestions for a couple of things that i noticed. discard them if you will but i'll puttem here anyways.

-"all those papers that woman left for me"

Oh, I would love for you to continue this but if it had to end, it went out with a bang! (Yeah, ok, bad pun!) Fantastic sex scene - loved the urgency and tension. Well done.

That was hot!

Wow! It's so wonderfull! Especially the last ... bit. I'm sorry you not gonner continue this story, but may be you are right. It might get too fluff, but could you write a story where they get down to business in future, please! It was a pleasure reading it, not to say more...
Anna

I love your writing! Your stories are usually short, but very well done. Great examples of the excellent story telling that can be found on this site.

I really liked it.

Nice. ;-)
Can't wait to read more.
Update soon!

DUDE! This is rather neat. I can't wait for more!