 ktkitty4 2009-03-29 . chapter 1Wow. Deep. Very well writen. I'm a little confused, though. |
 thequillofdestiny 2009-01-13 . chapter 1This was beautiful. Even though it wasn't perfectly clear, I'm pretty sure that Kyle was lying because of how Stan states 'that he should know it without all this' and it would explain why Kenny's mad at Kyle because of his views on family. Plus Kenny being a homophobe doesn't really make sense to me, but I don't know for certain. What I really wonder though is if Mrs. Broflovski was crying because her son had figured out she didn't truly love him anymore, or if it was because she was disappointed in him for lying and not trusting her.Anyway, great story, although in my mind once Kyle told the truth he and Kenny made up because I they both seem so alike in the fact that they're both so lively. Stan's more compassionate than fierce like those two seem to be, although Stan and Kyle compliment each other more. o.O Wow, now I just sounded like some goddamn designer from HGTV comparing wallpaper or something. x3 (bangs head to computer desk repeatedly) |
 Otempora42 2008-08-19 . chapter 1I don't think I need to repeat how much I love your stories. You use words in a way that's fuzzy and confusing, yet also really emotional. It makes the reader think about it, and I like that.
I'm not sure whether or not I should take the ending at face value -- that is, that Kyle was lying about being gay. It might take me a while to decide.
Anyway, great oneshot, and I look forward to your next efforts. |
 imjustagirl0077 2008-07-28 . chapter 1I'm asuming Kyle really is gay but just lied that he was straight to make his mother not mad at him. Am I right? I hope so. I really liked this one, too. Did you win the contest? |
 Loca Bambina 2008-07-16 . chapter 1Oh wow, eishi. Every time I open a new story of yours to read, I think "oh, this'll be good," and then it ends up being absolutely amazing, and I'm shocked every time that you're able to remain so incredible. :D
As for a review: I agree with the others, it's a little unclear, but that's what I like about your writing style. Your stories always convey so much emotion and, despite the confusing ending, the feelings definitely showed through in this one.
I like the phrase "felt more like being Jewish ethnically, not religiously" - it sums up a lot about Kyle's character in general. Also- Kenny usually prefers suicide to talking about his problems? Haha. I take it he's still dying regularly, then. Nice detail.
I do want to mention that I understand what's going on at the end, it just could've been worded a little better, you know? But otherwise, this is a fantastic story - just excellent. Good luck in the contest! |
 lowo-chan 2008-07-15 . chapter 1The ending is a little unclear, but I really enjoyed this...
Too bad you're so awesome. XD I'm totally going to lose this.
Anyway, I love how dark and troubled this is. . . It's just gorgeous. c: |
 Cherry Champagne 2008-07-13 . chapter 1Omigod I am BAWing so hard right now. D: I fuckin' give up. You're gonna win.
Ho. |
 Fletset 2008-07-13 . chapter 1:(
I told you what I think of this. Still a bit confused, and I still love the part with Stan puking in the bathroom. Have I told you that I liked how Kenny refused to talk to him, too? dunno why...
Aw, ending still unclear.
Good work, though! Good luck, dear! :D |
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