Ah NO~!
Did Zoro kill you? It hurts my heart to see that you haven't updated this for a year now ;;_;;

I love this so much it's beyond words! Zoro's too cute! Luffy's cuter! AND ACE OH MY GOD he's god damn HILARIOUS xD The best of Ace is precisely when he's being overly protective of his innocent little brother nyah~
And you can never go wrong with random abusing of household appliances 8D

I REALLY hope you would update this yet again even if it has been such a long time. Better late than never right? Any case, thank you for this at least.
Very funny, well written and utterly cute.

:D nice story man. But is this story on hold? that last update was 08.

haha, update son ;)

It's really cute, I like it! Update? Please?

coolz, i love this story :3
though i was hoping for a little more romance in ten chapters... *sigh*
ah well, i'll keep a watch on this anyway ;D
eh...
update soon!

oh oh! i reviewed! :D

"ANIKI ATTACK!"

best.attack.ever.

aniki attack > gigantic jet storm =A=U

lol ace is a pyromaniac x3, omg it would be so awesome if there was a AU fic, like all high school and all that, but the chars still had their powers, THAT WOULD KICK ASS!

btw is sanjixusopp a side pairing? O__o

johny and yosaku are adorable lol

Zoro turned several shades of red that would put even Shanks’ hair to shame. Captain-san is what she would call Luffy, wasn’t it?

Calm down, Zoro. She’s just trying to make you nervous, that’s all. There’s no way she knows. There’s no way anyone knows!

“I can help you, if you’d like.”

Dammit, she knows!!

LOL!

now the fic is happy! :D

-officially delcares this an awesome fic-

too sad! T.T

"you should hurt me too!"

-nosebleed-

no! luffy chan! TAT

-bashes zoros head in-

lol your seen changes are funny

this is too sad for one piece U.U -sob-

its too sad!... -sob-
T.T

ITS BEEN 6 DANG MONTHS NOW!


please write more! i cried, laughed, and laughed even more in one night!

I cannot wait to see how this all is going to end up. I totally am in love with the raging brother Ace mode. That was just so amusing. I can see it omake style and that really crack me up. And I so cannot wait for the moment when those two are official couples. Please, update soon.

i can so see zoro kind of pausing to think about that 'dead authors don't update' thing and just going like 'so?'
and then a little voice piping up and saying 'you won't get to bone luffy if she doesn't update, dumbass'
and zoro just being all 'oh shit!'