Hey I already reviewed this on deviant art (I'm coco-noisette over there) but I just wanted to say again how much I enjoyed this! I read it again and it's not any less interesting the second time. Anyway that's all, I hope you keep writing this trio because they're so good together. :)

Oh wow, Craig, Tweek, -and- Clyde! :)

I'll get the criticism out of the way first, because there isn't much. The biggest thing is a lot of the sentences were unclear; there were several run-ons and strangely worded phrases and some of it was hard to understand. There were a bit of grammar errors, too; mostly capitalization and some spelling mistakes, nothing big. Let's see... oh, and I know this is the shortened version, so it's really not a big deal, but I felt like there could've been a bit more elaboration on their feeligns - on Craig's especially, but also on Tweek's. Clyde's was perfect.

That said, this is incredible. You've got their personalities down; Craig's caring but very go-with-the-flow, Tweek's nervous and scared without being -too- spazzy, and Clyde's worried about being left out. I like the way this is written, how you've incorporated each of their POVs, and I love how their accents and slang show through in the narration to make up for the little dialogue (not that that's a bad thing at all - the narration works well with the piece and with the whole theme you have going on here.)

Anyway, great work!! Such an interesting... not pairing, um, threesome, I guess - it's not completely obscure, but it's definitely not Style, and therefore a bold move. :) Great job keeping the description and thoughts interesting and engaging, and nice characterization. Good luck in the contest!

OMG! I loved this so much! I'm so glad to see a Clyde/Tweek/Craig! There can never be enough of this pairing. Beutifly done, and I hope you write another one soon!

Dude, that was awesome! I loved everything about it, from Tweek being the intiator, to just the pairing itself. I can't wait to see an extended version of this.