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Ki-Chan
2008-08-03
ch 11, anon.
abuseDarn! I didn't expect this to end so soon! *humphs* Oh well. Now it looks like I have to wait for the next story to find out what I want to know. I'm already looking forward to it. And overall, I think this was a good story.
DMGirl44
2008-08-03
ch 11,
abusethat ending was really cool! blowing up that lab was pretty neat. all around, AWESOME job!
Ki-Chan
2008-08-03
ch 10, anon.
abuseThat was the last thing I expected- Wesker being a good guy all along. And I feel really bad that Vios died- he would have made a worthy ally had circumstances been different. I really can't wait for the next chapter and learning who Mattrina's father really is, seeing as how I now know who he ISN'T.
Ki-Chan
2008-07-31
ch 9, anon.
abuseYay! I'm so relieved that they managed to rescue Beast Boy! And this chapter has started making me look at Vios in a different way. I hope that the plans for awakening Cthulhu will not only be thwarted but Vios as well as Demongo will be returned to goodness. Please update soon!
DMGirl44
2008-07-30
ch 9,
abuseYAY! DMG got to help! like i said, that old gas-head was never owrthy to wield a monster as nice as her. and it's good to see that Beast Boy's ok.
Ki-Chan
2008-07-30
ch 8, anon.
abuseThat creep Gaston! Not only is he stupid but he has absolutely no sense of honor or fair play! I hope Mattrina not only rescues Beast Boy but also gives Gaston a taste of his own medicine! I can't stand this suspense!
DMGirl44
2008-07-29
ch 8,
abusethat was scary and crazy. but, it was a great chapter. and, i know that old gas-head plays with a deck full of beautiful female monsters(mostly) but, HE IS NOT WORTHY TO USE DARK MAGICIAN GIRL!

sorry about the outburst, but i hate that guy's guts and only nice guys have the right to use her.
DMGirl44
2008-07-29
ch 7,
abusecool chapter. it's getting intense and that symbolizes the best parts of stories are coming up.
Pyros Aves
2008-07-29
ch 7,
abuseI would need to review your past stories to be sure, but after reading the last chapter, I suspect that it is Wesker. It would at least partially explain his vendeta against Mattrina. I look forward to the next chapter and any future stories you come up with.
Ki-Chan
2008-07-28
ch 7, anon.
abuseWow! What a twist! So Demongo is a victim too, huh? I'm thinking the shadow is either Vios or Gaston, considering the latter's cruelty and also, there were four dashes where the shadow's name was censored, but I could be mistaken either way. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Ki-Chan
2008-07-28
ch 6, anon.
abuseThis is becoming more and more intriguing- Nayala having more connections to Mattrina and the Liv Kingdom than originally assumed and Demongo once being a good guy- whatever happened? And knowing Gaston, whatever he's planning next is definitely no good, I'm sure of it. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter!
DMGirl44
2008-07-27
ch 6,
abusei've just gotta say this, that Demongo dude is making me think of Chase Young from Xiaolin Showdown. the 'lizard boy' insult from old Gas-head(Chase morphs into a giant lizard) and the facts that he moves so fast and that he was once good and has a strong sense of honor. he could be another version of Chase.

but, this story is pretty cool. great job and keep it up.
Ki-Chan
2008-07-26
ch 5, anon.
abuseThanks for the update! Man, I can't help but wonder if Gaston will truly get his just desserts courtesy of Demongo- and if so how. And in regards to that cloud, is Vios plotting something behind Demongo's back? He's not planning to awaken Cthulhu himself is he? Don't keep us in suspense! (BTW, I feel really bad that I'm the only one reviewing so far /_\ You're stories deserve more reviews)
Ki-Chan
2008-07-21
ch 4, anon.
abuseWhile I still don't like Demongo very much, all the same I have to say it's about time he decided to do something about Gaston! That bastard just doesn't know when to quit. And I hope Mattrina gets out of her coma soon! I'd hate to see the bad guys so close to victory! Please oh please update soon!
Ki-Chan
2008-07-19
ch 3, anon.
abuse*Sighs and rolls eyes* Why am I not surprised that Gaston was going to show up yet again? I don't know much about "YuGiOh GX", let alone Hassleberry, but I bet he's definitely going to kick Gaston's a** in the next chapter! Don't keep us in suspense! Update soon!
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