...did Itachi just die?


Can you fix your grammar some please? It's hard to read.

Nice Update!

What's gonna happen next?

Please Continue!

good updat esoon

wow. So Kyuubi's tears are like a Pheonix's? That's cool. :D

nice chappie. XD

...huh? a little confusing.

Interesting... but still pretty short, try starting a new line whenever the speaker changes, cramping everything together into one paragraph makes it harder to read. I can't wait to see Hinata's reaction to her relation to Ishiba.

Pretty much in cannon events. You forgot that Itachi gave his power to Naruto through a crow into the mouth. Itachi just popping up in there was a bit 'hashed together' in my opinon.

I loved it!

I'm looking forward to the updated story.

I would have reviewed but when you replace a chapter those who have already reviewed it can't review the new one. I think it was done very well.

Nice Chapter!

that was just tacky you had an other wise great story going then you had to introduce a disny song into it

hahaha, yea that as corny but oh so much fun to read. that song is going to be stuck in my head for a while now.

Write on