nice ending.

cute

nice

I like it.

Angsty, sweet and funny all together. Great mix, and splendidly done.

Aww that was cute and a bit sad! Great job! I loved it!! ^_^

love the last line. Very insightful.

cute

Poor Jiraiya. XD

Really ineresting, hope to read more.

Cute side story to Treasure Chest and Silver Feather

The dark side of being a ninja, nice. Too many people think being a ninja is all glory.

interesting mix of happiness and sadness.

sad.

I like the way you write your stories! =D It was great!




I really want to thank you for reviewing my story, because I needed someone to tell what was wrong with it, I totally agree with you about the over descriptiveness of my fic. I didn't know I had that many mistakes though, I was like...wow, I did horrible. Um about the pinkette, its not a real word I just kinda of made it up XD

You weren't mean at all, you helped me alot and I thank you
peace and love,
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