 TemhotaTech 2009-02-20 . chapter 1Nice Story Hope you update soon! Oh and i have some ideas for Hamsterviel's Army! So far you equipped with his army with Nod Weaponry. I think his army should include the following weapons and vehicles from the following games: Tabula Rasa, CNC3 Tiberium Wars, Red Alert 3, Gears of War, Unreal Tournament 3, Timeshift, Hellgate: London, Quake, and World in Conflict. I think there were some other but oh well! I might give you them later. Sign the Big Guy! (Im taller then the average human!). |
 lieutenant spark 2008-11-16 . chapter 4ore dude |
 mpkio2 2008-11-11 . chapter 4YOU FINNALY UPDATED! I THOUGHT YOU WERE DEAD! j/k
I actrually had to go back and re-read Chapter 1-3 - I forgot what happenend; How long has it been since you updated?
Aweomse so far! k33p it up! :) |
 stitch8000 2008-11-11 . chapter 4cool to see you are back in the game hopp to see more soon and dont be a steanger ok |
 lord maul160 2008-11-10 . chapter 4Hey, this was great! We get to see the ghost form in action. Well, there's nothing else to say, but you kept everything in character, and even added some character to Sparky. |
 123qaz 2008-07-30 . chapter 3Aloha!
This was a nice chapter. It had many funny moments like the slapfight between Sparky and Pshych. So Psych has womanphobia. Well we all can't be smooth ladiesmen. Now he also has to exercise. Now that's bad luck. I wonder why beings that have been programmed to be superstrong have to exercise. Maybe otherwise they will remain superstrong but get fat (Clyde is a bit overweight but he still survived a shot from plasma gun in Leroy & Stitch). Now that would be ridiculous.
I can imagine it. A bunch of male experiments exercising and telling dirty jokes while having all their limbs out. Now that smells like testosterone (Throws head back and laughs diabolically.).
You are having huge procrastination? I can offer some ideas if you want. I helped lord maul160 in his fic too.
Thanks from the chapter and see you soon!
123qaz |
 mpkio2 2008-07-30 . chapter 3You finnaly update!! :)
Gr8 chapter! :)
Loving the Psych and Sparky slap fight. That reminded me of "Drake & Josh" as well. LOL
K33p up da great work! :) |
 stitch8000 2008-07-29 . chapter 3cool plz more and soom plz |
 lord maul160 2008-07-29 . chapter 3Lmfao this was good. I think Psych's experiment hormones kicked in. Lol the slap-fight was good. You've written this well, everyonee's in character from what I can tell. Good job, you deserve an internet cookie! -hands you cookie- |
 123qaz 2008-07-16 . chapter 2Aloha!
So here comes another nice chapter. I have to say that you don't waste time to let your characters stand still. That's good. This was a good chapter and I hope that you will update soon. It will be interesting to find out what happens next.
Thanks for this chapter and see you soon!
123qaz |
 mpkio2 2008-07-15 . chapter 2Yeah!
Love this fanfic - it's so interesting!!
UPDATE LIKE NOW, PLEASE! |
 mpkio2 2008-07-15 . chapter 1Wow - why didn't I think of a fanfic like this?
I'm really loving this fanfic!
But the way, Stitch and the experiments speak Turian not Tantalog. Just fault I let you know that.
*Goes to read next chapter* > |
 lord maul160 2008-07-15 . chapter 2This one was pretty good, although I would of thought that Stitch would attack Leroy on sight. You kept everyone in character. Keep it comin'. |
 stitch8000 2008-07-15 . chapter 2very nice the storu is geting more exsiting by the minet!
plz more and soon plz |
 123qaz 2008-07-15 . chapter 1Aloha!
Interesting fic you are having here. You have a nice tongue in cheek feeling in this one. I especially liked the part where Lilo threw you with a rock. Few authors have allowed their self insertion characters to be thrown with rocks. Small things that give me a big laugh. I hope you continue this thing. I would like to know where you are taking this fic. There are many possibilities but I hope you will try something that lordmaul hasn't yet tried.
See you soon!
123qaz |