this was extremely good

Well done. Great story about the beginning of Cole's life and, more importantly, his demonic nature.

Aw, and I thought you might at least skip to the point where he actually met Phoebe for the first time. ;)

Good chapter, as always. Enjoyed a not-so-subservient female in the Underworld for a change. Nicely done.

interesting idea to go into Cole's past...very good job, please update soon.

Wow, you update fast. And this chapter was really good. So was chapter 4. I'm really enjoying the story so far and I can't wait to see where it's going.

Pretty cool chap :D Loved the way Cole showed his mom where s her place :D She was so bad to him, I m really glad he did this. N I m looking forward to what happens next :D Hope he ll survive the training.

OMG :D I d love to help u by some constructive critism. The problem is, that I can t find anything wrong in your story. So damned good, pls post another chap soon :D

Good story. Cole as a child... hmm... His childhod seems very viollent but I guess thats what you get when you're a demon and part human! I'm glad Cole finally stood up for himself. It would be pretty odd to have an brother almost 400yrs older than you...

Enough of my rambling. I wonder who will take Cole as their apprentice...

Please continue

Hey, I ve just found out about this story. It s just excellent :D Really love it , Cole s my very fav character in Charmed, n I ve always wondered what was he put through during his childhood, what did it take for him to become such a mighty and feared demon. Thanks for writing this story. And a really good chap, btw what happened to Greggson?

Love your stories, JB - and this one seems familiar. Is it already posted on your own site? I've read all those, including your new "Attitudes." You've got a real talent - thanks for sharing it with us.

Hey excellent chapter. Loved Cole finally standing up for himself and I can't wait to read the rest of the story.

Great chapter. I enjoyed the twist of Cole's fully demonic brother. I hope you update soon because I'm definitely intrigued by this story.

Hey,
Really enjoying this story so far. It's good to see that you're going back to Cole's roots. It should make for a very interesting story.

Oh...I'm interested.