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| XoCrazyGuurlPirateLuvverXo 2008-07-15 ch 1, | abuseI request more! this is really good! I liked it a lot! |
| FOBsession-DL-Freak 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseI. Want. More. Gosh. Darn. It. Hahahaha. This was amazing. I loved the details. There weren't many, but they were all good. I loved how you described Dana. It's exactly how I see her style, not the homeless part. Hahahah. Update! |
| Simply Sarah 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI agree with your first review, I'd love to read more. It was well written and captivating, which makes it a very refreshing read. This is the first time I've stumbled into this category as a reader in a very long while and I'm so glad that I did because it allowed me to read this very original DL-which there seem to be far too few of these days. Wonderful job! And I'll say it again, I'd love to read more, but if you feel that it truly ended here, then that is fine as well since it is your story and therefore totally your decision, plus it was great as is. Sincerely, Sarah |
| schilling.klaus 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseDana+Logan cute as usual |
| SonoIoLaBellissima 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseoh ye of little faith...I would like to read more! Please? |