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| ni-chan and mit-chan007 2008-08-21 ch 7,  | abuseI'm guessing the speaker is Utau, but I'm not sure. Cute! |
| babo123 2008-08-21 ch 7, | abuseHmm, I'm not sure who's the aunty, but I'm guessing that's Utau with Ikuto's and Amu's son? Really beautiful, you really captured what Utau's feelings would be to hold something that she wished was hers. Please update soon nyaa~ |
| Emmoria 2008-08-20 ch 7, | abuseAw. Well, she may not be his mom(as it should be)but that nephew of hers really loves her. |
| Emmoria 2008-08-20 ch 6, | abuseI like it. Yaya's POV right? I would like to see one from Kukai. ^_^ |
| MochiMochi-tan 2008-08-20 ch 7, | abuseOh! I really really liked this one. You put a lot of different things together XD You expressed Utau's I guess you can say matureness by accepting AmuxIkuto but at the same time you still have her struggling over that fact...ok I'm not exactly sure where that came from but thats what I got from it. Hahaha XD I'm sorry if this confused you, but I have to say this will probably be my favorite and I doubt that it will change. You have a wonderful talent for writing. I can't wait for more. I bet you're Yoru one will be lots of fun. KYAA! >/< I can't wait! |
| Hime-And-Ikuto 2008-08-20 ch 1, | abusegreat chapters, chapter 7 is just like chapter 1, is that normal? |
| The Doomed Commentor 2008-08-20 ch 6, | abuseo_o Just a heads up, unless you did this on purpose.. (Which you probably did.. >_>) The 7th chapter is the same as the 1st. >_> |
| KeikoHayasaka 2008-08-20 ch 7, | abuseyou used the wrond document. it's the first chapter! or is it supposed to be like that? |
| KeikoHayasaka 2008-08-20 ch 6, | abuseYAY! good, i was able to figure it out easily this time! PHEW! |
| MochiMochi-tan 2008-08-20 ch 6, | abuseSo cool! Just like Yaya! ^-^ I bet a Nagihiko one would be really cool. But anyways, about a scene when Ami interacted with Ikuto hm...well...there was a slight one in episode 43 but she kinda just runs past him and he's 'like what the heck? O_o' haha I don't think that would be very good material but its there. You could also play with the fact that she LOVES Utau and since they're siblings you could create one. Well thats all I got for just waken up. GOOD LUCK! |
| babo123 2008-08-20 ch 6, | abuseSo cute. I especially loved Amu's Papa's POV. I wonder why he calls her his little sparrow xDD Please update soon nyaa~ |
| Emmoria 2008-08-19 ch 5, | abuseI really love your style of writing. I like how you tied the "sparrow" and "cat" together. I have never thought of it that way before. Keep up the good work. I look forward to the next installment. ^_- |
| peaceful abyss 2008-08-19 ch 5, | abuseSweet. Amu's parents don't get much credit. Kudos to you on giving them their proper share of fanfiction! |
| Fye-sama 2008-08-19 ch 5, | abuseWonderful! I really like how you write! |
| MochiMochi-tan 2008-08-19 ch 5, | abuseAwesome more Hinamori family love! ^-^ |