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Caramel13
2009-11-23 . chapter 22
wow.
i didn't like it as much as sleeping somewhere cold, but it was still really damn good.
i love your writing, you make the characters seem alive in a way so many fail at. sure, there's a bunch of typos and some stuff where you just go "huh?" but still definetely worth a read.
Sirin Black
2009-11-23 . chapter 22
WOW that was an amazing story! You even made me teary during the Harry/Remus scene *sniff sniff* well done :D
Elle
2009-11-23 . chapter 22
That was an amazing ending to a great story - the description was amazing, especially in the last couple of chapters. It was an awsome plotline with an intersting development of characters - well done!
Cynthia1850
2009-11-23 . chapter 22
Wow, that was amazing. I wasn't too sure at the beginning about this story line but it really was very well written and imaginative and I'm so glad I read it and so glad you wrote it. Thanks.
wkdwitch666
2009-11-22 . chapter 22
Hi i have read this great story from day one and i am so sorry to see the end of it. I have loved all the twists and turns in Harry and Voldemorts relationship. I have to know though is Ulric going to be popping up again? perhaps in a sequel? or even a side story about his life before Harry comes along? Just a thought! again great story cant wait to see what you come up with next!
GeorgieGirl999
2009-11-22 . chapter 22
this a really good story!! good job!
BladesoftheValkyrie
2009-11-22 . chapter 22
Great story! I wish there could have been a happier ending, but that's just because I'm a sucker for them. I think the way you ended it was very realistic and true to the preceding plot.

On a side note, I really feel as though you could benefit from a beta. Your grammar and sentence flow is pretty good, but you often use incorrect (although similar) words. For example, when you were discussing genetics, you said someone had a "submissive" gene, but but I'm pretty sure you wanted to say "recessive." Not a big deal, I knew what you meant, but a beta is great for catching those pesky sorts of things. ;)

Overall, a very enjoyable read, and I thank you for sharing it with us. I look forward to seeing more from you. Well done! ^_^
A Single Fragile Rose
2009-11-21 . chapter 22
I LOVE YOUR STORRY!! I'M SOO FREAKING SAD, IT'S DONE! WOW...JUST WOW...

OH, WELL, DARN IT..I WANT TO CRY! I'M SUCH A WIMP! LOL
YOUR THE ONLY STORY I WANT TO CRY OVER, NOW THAT IT'S FINISHED! NOT LIKE THE OTHERS, *OUCH* [BURN]
SH... DON'T SAY ANYTHINNG! OR I'LL BE HUNTED DOWN AND CASTRATED! AND I LOVE BEING A GIRL, BESIDE MY MON MONS WILL CRY BLOODY MURDER! LOL SORRY, KINDA HIGH ON THE CHOCLATE!XO

BUT THE GOOD THING IS, YOU HAVE OTHER STORIES! JA NE AND GOOD LUCK! TAKE CARE, CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER GREAT STORY! MUCHO AMOR FOR YOU! XOXO YOU REALLY ARE ONE OF THE BESTT! =]]
Celestialuna
2009-11-21 . chapter 22
awesome story!!
Celestialuna
2009-11-21 . chapter 21
I hope Harry is okay?
drumroll
2009-11-20 . chapter 22
That was a good ending. I'm glad Remus had a peaceful death like that.
I wanted to see a little more of Ulric though because I thought his fight with Harry didn't show his experience and power he'd gained from his past hundred years of being alive. However, he wasn't that important of a character, so it's not much of a loss.
Wow, i can't believe this story is finished. I've loved this fic all the way. Congratulations and thankyou so much!
Wild Black
2009-11-20 . chapter 22
Awesome, awesome story. ;)
Dracosgirl
2009-11-20 . chapter 22
I knew Remus's death was coming and still it brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful story. I really enjoyed it.
Ater Phasma
2009-11-19 . chapter 22
Well, there's a good story. Excellent characterization and emotion in your characters. Great read.

Cheers!
Cad2u
2009-11-19 . chapter 22
OMG, this story was so good and so cute/sad! Poor Remus, bless him so much (I was a tad too thick to get the hints suggested in the last chap lmao) Sniff... I like that Dumbledore got his respected grave at Hogwarts and Harry realised that he was loved and that he meant the best but became blind. Much better than if you'd just had dumbles bashing :P ! Very impressed and sad irs finished!! xx
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