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| sarah13216 2008-10-07 ch 1,  | abuseVery cute! Very well written! I could see them as kids! |
| broonksa 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abuseThey've not been good with the moment or reasons to give rings but the moment here is good for both of them. |
| ericlovesdonna 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abuseSweet, mood rings! So they are good with rings, contrary to what was said in epsiode 5x05... (the "Man Ring" episode) Eric: You know, Donna, we are really bad with rings. Donna: Yeah, when we get married, we should just exchange like, buckets of chicken. LOL! I love this fic:D |
| Kawaii.Princess.of.Socks 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseAw...that was really cute! |
| jaykaythree 2008-07-23 ch 1, | abuseA good start to how my fave Show couple got started. Everyone had to start somehow, why not like that. |
| ohforpitysake 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseWhat a sweet story! Whatever made you think of mood rings? (boy, that takes me back) I love Donna's comment, "So, if I'm mad at you..." It's SO Donna, and Eric's response that red is the color his Dad turns... sounds just like him. I can just hear 8-year-old Hyde and Kelso cracking up. Great story, well done! |
| Mo Fo Sho 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseTHIS...is adorable. :) You should write more, forget leaving it a one-shot. The characters are very true to their older selves, and there is potential here to write a great fanfic about our characters in a younger setting, which isn't done that often. :) Great job! |
| twentysevenseconds 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was adorable! Totally believable moment between them, I think. I love cute, pre-series fluff. Great job :] |