Found this a little boring as most of it was lifted straight from the movie - and weren't there loads of people doing jobs on the deck at the time? Couldn't get to grips with this one...sorry!

great story!

This was really good actually and pretty realistic. I thought it was really entertaining, good job.

Great story, I hope that you will consider making it longer.

Dani

Sorry, I don't remember this scene in the movie. Maybe it was in the deleted scenes category...? I noticed a couple discrepancies but from your note at the beginning I guess you'll be going back over this at a later date.

Good fic, all in all.

all this crap was,was from the movie ~BORING