This was a good wraping up of a story that held a lot of promise. I m sorry this review is so late - but sorrier still that you had to write somthng less than your intended story. From eveything I have read of yours, you are a very capable, talented writer and I would have gladly have followed and supported your origional story.
Will keep following your other Brothehood pieces.

Congrats on finishing it- regardless of nonsense from people who didn't give you the proper amount of respect and faith in your abilities! Your a good writer and I wasn't worried about the piece for a single second. Keep having faith in yourself!

Very nice job of pulling together a really tough story.

Hey!
God, I know you posted this days ago. Busy week! I didnt mean to take this long in reviewing but its sunday and before I do anything else I wanted to drop by and say HI

The starting scene really grabbed me. I think it was just so intense and maybe its just my love for seeing them hurt but it was just awesome. And I like that it was Jim that was there in the ambulance

Nice way to end it too :)

Well done, my friend ;)

Tara x0x

I'm so sorry to hear that you got a lot of bad feedback. I read through the reviews here on ff and they all looked good. I can't tell you how disappointed I was not to get to read more of the story. I'd still like to read about Mac meeting John for the first time ... well I'd like to read anymore you'd be willing to post. I did enjoy this chapter. My only regret is that Bobby didn't sic a dog on Duran.

Phoebe

I'm really sorry that you didn't take this in the direction where you wanted it to go,for the record I would have supported you all the way x But having said that I still enjoyed it, it was very good, are you going to do a follow up though? You can't leave us hanging like that...go on...cookies are in it for you...peanut butter one just like Mary used to make x

WOW! that was intense. In the story the Line I got the impression Duran was totally bad news and wondered about Caleb's reaction to him. Had a feeling it was some type of incident.

Caleb could have just read him to find out what type of person he was and that would have been enough of a reaction point.

This does put a whole other angle on it. I never would have thought Elkins would have visited Caleb- when you put that part in I automatically thought of Duran. was the amulet like/same one Dean has. sounds like it.

very interesting story-loved Mac's portraial(?) Love father's reacting-well like father's should.

good job!

I'm glad you made the effort to give this story an ending after all the heartache, and I was glad to sort of know what happened to Caleb and how Duran was dealt with and how John Winchester came to be the Knight.

But I have to say, the fact that this is not the story you wanted to tell shows. It doesn't have the same compelling quality the first 2 chapters had. It's well written and informative, but for me it lacks the passion that is usually found in your work. Sorry I don't want to upset.

would have loved it to be longer and more detailed about everything that happened. Too bad the negatives guys won...

Lots crammed into there! Lots I really want to see written out, nay sayers be damned. Looks like the muse has returned; I would love for you to take the told story and put it into the action story. It's a great story and should be told. Too many delectible possibilities. I want to see Caleb get grabbed by the priest, want to see Caleb sneak off with Duran, want to throttle Duran for all the lies he feeds the Brotherhood.

Please, please, please, don't let the unhappy ones put you off. Please reconsider and give us the story like you meant it to be!

All the same, excellent work!

That really sucks. Iv'e been really curious about this story since it was mentioned in the line and I had assumed Ridley was going to flesh it out sense it was hinted at so much. This story had alot of promise, and as much as I love the brotherhood and the way everyone, especially ridley, writes it; I think it's really sad and a bit weird that even though all this Duran Caleb stuff was so blatenly implied, the creators of it are backing down and its affecting you. This whole thing is just a big distracting plot hole for me. Im not saying I want any super disturbing stuff to go on, I just want the story to be told. I know it's not your fault and Im sure this story would have been tasteful and great, Im just **. Someone needs to finish this story up, seriously, this is getting ridiculous.

Just found this story and was really intrigued and enjoying it. Disappointed to see your note in chapter 3 but I guess I'll watch out for the tag and check out your home page for your past stories as I've been loving your writing so far on this.

I'm sorry to read that you feel unable to complete this story as you had originally intended, I for one was looking forward to seeing where it was going and as always was trusting in your integrity as a writer.

However, I will still be back to read the 'tag' and anything that comes afterwards.

Best wishes.

i'm sorry to hear that you were getting so much negativity about your story, i really think you're a great writer though so i look forward to reading your finally tag on it

i'm a huge Brotherhood fan, and usually avoid the stories not fitting in the storyline, but you always did good before and i would have loved to read your version for this story. Anyway, i'll read that tag, and your following work.