hey! plz dont make it da end... dere's more chapters rite?? it jst sounded like it was an ambiguous end where pplz jst fink of da possibilities dat cud happen 2 rhen n lars.

but loving it stiLL!.

That was an amazing story! ^__^ and I really loved the ending... nothing could be better than that since it IS Rhen and Lars. :D Subtle but sweet!

Great work! :D

i need an ending soon!! it was jst getting very very interesting. lolz. plz rite upload soon!

ahahha... Lars being drunk is hilarious. gr8 work.

getting interesting already!! xD

hey! havent visitd 4 a while until i came across ur drawing of danny, rhen n lars. wich led 2 me reading dis. gud start!! i'm gonna read da nxt chapt. =P

Aww... that was bittersweet...! Poor Rhen though, now that she's started to realize her feelings for Lars. But, nonetheless, I absolutely enjoyed this chapter! (Dameon is still hilarious in this ^^)

Can't wait for the conclusion!

This chapter was LOVE! *glomps* WEE! Ah, I laughed so much in this one! Especially when Lars got drunk! And there's fluffy Lars/Rhen moments too! (yosh! he finally kissed her! :D)

Update soon!

Woot! Great chapter, a bit shot but nonetheless fun to read (i.e: scorpion + Galahad XD) I hope you write something about the festivities next! ^^

Go Rhen/Lars!

KEE! I can tell that this is going to be such a CUTE story! XD I'm especially sure I'm going to like more of Dameon and Lars's fights over Rhen :D

Continue on! Go! XD Update kay? I'm putting this on alerts