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salty-sarah
2009-07-26 . chapter 16
i've been following this fic for a while now, and while i have to admit that i don't entirely understand what is going on all the time, i do love it all the same for that timeless quality it evokes.

i'm curious to see what kind of resolution this fic will have. i don't know if it's the sort of fic to require a solid resolution, or rather a soft, sort of fade away. i think either would work, but i'd love to read a solid resolution, no pressure there (not much, really (o; ), just because i think it'll be harder to write than a fade-away thing. i hope i made sense (o: much love for all the work you've put into this! (o;
DarkestCornerOfMyMind
2009-07-25 . chapter 16
... You continued.

OMIGOD! XD I LOVE YOU! 1896 (okay, really not that many 6's, but you get the point.)
anonymous
2009-07-14 . chapter 15
As something of a blanket review, I absolutely love your drabbles. Your writing style is wonderful - confusing in the best of ways and flows with grace that you don't see very often. I love the fluent descriptions, the characterizations are mature (if lacking the humor characteristic of KHR), and the very mood of each piece is lovely. PURE LOVE. Great work with all the fics.

I'm also very fond of your Hibari and Chrome, because it's not very often when you see these two together, so that just makes me adore them even more. If you don't mind me making a request fic, I would love to see more Hibari/Chrome with the prompt of "rolling my thoughts to the overwhelming question, the sound of all the bells chiming". Thanks.
DarkestCornerOfMyMind
2009-07-05 . chapter 15
Omigod I love your Hibari/Chrome XD

Thanks for these great drabbles!
Ilye-aru
2009-01-02 . chapter 12
I'm late, slowpoke me.

I-I feel unworthy, because this drabble was AWESOME. I loved the whole relaxed atmosphere of it, which a lot of fics for this fandom seems to lack. Gokudera is really fun when he's being silly and I really, really like how you write him, seriously.

I loved it |3
chesauroshin
2008-11-23 . chapter 10
Firstly, thank you!

Gokudera bumming around on the beach and generally being stubborn in between interrupting himself all the time kind of hurt in a good way. Then, once Tsuna finally comes to get him (because he really is concerned, it's *Tsuna*), he just falls back on explaining the castle with scientific details because he's still unsure of himself, a bit. But then Gokudera's realization about Tsuna made me smile so big. Even though the last line reminds me of the TYL arc and makes me wonder how old they are, exactly, I still really liked the fic.

Looked up the movie, and it seems really appropriate for Gokudera in this little ficlet.
twenty ducats
2008-11-23 . chapter 10
I'm very impressed with this collection so far. Your writing style is amazingly fluid, and even with its eccentricies (which I think is necessary to add interest to a piece of writing) it works perfectly. You can put things in different ways without making them convoluted or too difficult to wrap one's brain around, which I feel is the point.

I can't wait to read more.
Ilye-aru
2008-11-23 . chapter 10
I love all of your KHR fics, but (for some reason) this one it's my favourite. MAYBE I'M BIASED ASFDFDGFD.

I love how you wrote Gokudera, really. It's wonderful.
leriko
2008-11-17 . chapter 9
Whuo! This is so beautifully written! And dang! Even a little bit of 1896 moment like this can make me squeal! XD Love it!
I-chan
2008-11-17 . chapter 9
...the variation of 'almost, almost, almost' that keeps intruding in the text gives this story such a feeling of incompleteness - and it actually works well with the open ending! ^o^

The brief references to the past and light hints to the future help to blur the moment presented, and give it that DREAMY atmosphere that I SO adore about your writing! ^__^ The mass sort of caught me by surprise, though... is it a reference to the 'Mukuro = God' association in Chrome's mind, or to the both of them lacking SOMETHING after his departure and Chrome simply presenting a possibility...?

P.S. I think Chrome would prefer chocolate ice-cream, by the way... BARNEY chocolate, according to her profile, though I've no idea what that might be! XD
I-chan
2008-11-01 . chapter 8
Df$"Ur$%Ag$%G"$fD"&tG&Hs...!

YOU FINISHED IT! AND IT IS MADE OF AWESOME! ^o^ ...damn it, I can't write with little hearts in fanfiction-net's reviews... >:(

I love this - the unfinished sentences that stop suddenly only to give way to another, the situations changing with no warning and Chrome's quiet acceptance of all this... it feels sort of stifling, and sort of sad, and even sort of co-dependant of Mukuro, and-and - in short, thank you thank you and thank you very much. ^^ Even though I'm a little late in replying, lol. XD

...also, my God, poor Hibari! I'm gonna write that off as a dream, lol. XD
I-chan
2008-09-21 . chapter 7
Loved it. ^o^

I liked the circular nature of the story, and Chrome's confusion was palpable, in the way only descriptions of physical sensations can be. You managed to convey her feelings perfectly through the use of touch and temperature, good job! ^__^

I must admit to some confusion myself about Mukuro's and Hibari's 'appearances' - they seemed so fleeting that I had a hard time placing them in some semblance of order... but I suppose that was the point, right? ^^;
Princess one99five
2008-09-20 . chapter 7
... So what happens if you grasp a leaf while it's drifting from its branch?

Idk I found tht cute 8)
hyperdude
2008-09-20 . chapter 7
I love that really nice warm cozy, dreamy feathery feeling present in the piece. There's so much attention to detail, and I love the flow.
respectfully
2008-09-03 . chapter 6
You do know that
I am in love with you right.


I am going now to read all of your other stories.
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