Finally, i've been waiting for the update of this fic for quite some time, and dissapointed i was not.

Hope the next chapter will come soon.

nice

Almost missed this one altogether. If you hadn't updated, I probably would have. That would have been...unfortunate.

Only two chapters, and you have my undivided attention with your "Temp" character. I'm looking forward to some tension and history with this fic.

Well done, so far. I'm enjoying the read. Please continue!
(Perhaps at a rate exceeding one update per calendar year. :-) )

Interesting stuff. I'm certainly curious as to what comes next.

exciting chapter. this new enemy is really interesting. hope you update soon.

Well, looks like Temp has doen one of the worst things there, and gotten Keichi to start doubting himself and the love that ties he and Bell together, and will be hopeful the two fot hem can go forward in their beliefs in the end.

Thank you very much for updating this great piece of story. I really like this Temp person. Hope tere will be another chapter soon.

This new character has me curious, like who he is and just how much power does he have to allow him to talk to Hild so brazenly? And how does he know belldandy? I'm hoping to see the next chapter to this.

Okay. You've scratched my curiosity bump. ::nods::

I'm totally lost for words. The way you describe everything is just great and I want to know what will happen next.

Very nice story please continue

Hild is releasing something like that for a petty purpose? I guess she's tired of existence.

Another good fanfic you made Shade. I hope you reveal who this mysterious character in the prison is in the next chapter as his identity hasn't been revealed. Belldandy, Skuld, and Hild are my absolute favorite characters of Ah! My Goddess. Is this mysterious character infactuated with Belldandy? Will he break her heart by sleeping with her and then leaving her like she was a conquered prize? I would NOT like that one bit if it happened! Please update soon! I want to know what happens next!

Interesting. Well-written. I look forward to reading more.

I have no idea what's going on, but I'm liking it.