Hey~ho, away~we~go.

First of all, two quick things; Nephry has a hard PoV to do, yeah, good job on maintaining it. Secondly... Dist's hair is like... pink. Lavender is a shade of purple.

I see how writing Nephry's POV would be very hard. She's not included a whole lot in the story, making it even harder. But you did a really good job!

Great POV of Nephry's.I couldn't believe it when Jade died and then...it was all after Akzeriuth.Nice one.Poor Saphir though,had to be slapped.