Aw, Zack. x3 Your attempts to seduce Cloud aren't really working. -cuddles Cloud-

I actually admire Zack's attempts, though. xD He just doesn't give up! And he's funny, too. That's always a good thing. "You wouldn't like me if I weren't an honourable man, would you?" That was hilarious xDD

I like this idea, it's a really good story so far. It'll be fun to see how things come about that it's to be a threesum. I really would like to know what happens next.

update, update, upDATE!
Please?!?!

My review is as follows: XD

Very cute. I'm glad that you have updated. Update soon please.

I like it so far. It's really cute.

I hope you don't mind that I'm going to review the two stories here. ^.^

I this story was a great idea, it's very original, in my opinion. I have never seen someone cross Final Fantasy with chobits, I find it to be a great idea.
Your spelling was perfect from what I could see, or at least I didn't notice anything. Keap up the great work~!

Whats next, whats next.

Lol. What an original concept! I'm really looking forward to reading what happens next. Will Cloud scream really loud upon wakening? And will Sephiroth come running with Masamune in hand to save poor Cloud? I do hope inspiration will hit soon.

that was so cute! I think I got cavities from all that sweetness! I really like how you described Zack's personality, and that last line - “Heh, Cloud, you’ve completely underestimated me, haven’t you? A SOLDIER can lie in wait for as long as they need to catch their quarry and complete their mission,” he uttered softly into the boy’s golden locks, pressing a kiss there as he finished. “Good night, little one.”

- that was priceless! *fangirl squeel*

lol, this is both funny and cute. as for ideas, how about 'the morning after', 'meeting angeal/genesis'(separately or together), 'babysitters' for when all four are gone on a mission, 'day out into the town', 'meeting aeris', 'turks' and maybe 'rufus'? sorry if they're all short words but i only seem to come up with short answers more easily :P. hope this helps and update soon, yeah?

i have a idea how to get sephiroth in :D zack goes on a mission and cloud for a unknown reason can't go*winkwinknudgenudge* so sephiroth has to take care of cloud :D

I love it! As for prompts...hm...*ponders* The Real Reason not to wake Seph in the morning XD

onto a way to break seph into the relationship...maybe something with zack talking to seph about why cloud doesnt seem to be warming up to him "why doesnt he like me? am i not pretty enough" and...idk...i lost the thought, sorry!

“Good night, little one.”

Aw, Zack.

hm,I think I've got an idea with the threesome part.how about Sephiroth protects Cloud from bullies?it may kinda sound a bit like the oldest trick in the book,but it'd help if Zack was busy with something else at the time.^^ anyway,it was just a thought.

update soon!
-Death