OMG now I want my own Cloud Persocom *A*
Cute little bastard

Love how easily Zack took to Cloud here even though he's a robot.

Hope you will someday find the time and muse to update this :)

woo! cant wait for more! :D

I tell u...ur story is the cutest thing on earth,...

Like the message on fridge and the zack chasing cloud by messaging...I love it all..plsease produce more ffvii fics and hopeflly thresome. and

do pls update this fic

Great story please dont end it yet! Continue.

Aw, Zack. x3 Your attempts to seduce Cloud aren't really working. -cuddles Cloud-

I actually admire Zack's attempts, though. xD He just doesn't give up! And he's funny, too. That's always a good thing. "You wouldn't like me if I weren't an honourable man, would you?" That was hilarious xDD

I like this idea, it's a really good story so far. It'll be fun to see how things come about that it's to be a threesum. I really would like to know what happens next.

update, update, upDATE!

Please?

My review is as follows: XD

Very cute. I'm glad that you have updated. Update soon please.

I like it so far. It's really cute.

I hope you don't mind that I'm going to review the two stories here. .

I this story was a great idea, it's very original, in my opinion. I have never seen someone cross Final Fantasy with chobits, I find it to be a great idea.

Your spelling was perfect from what I could see, or at least I didn't notice anything. Keap up the great work!

Whats next, whats next.

Lol. What an original concept! I'm really looking forward to reading what happens next. Will Cloud scream really loud upon wakening? And will Sephiroth come running with Masamune in hand to save poor Cloud? I do hope inspiration will hit soon.

that was so cute! I think I got cavities from all that sweetness! I really like how you described Zack's personality, and that last line - “Heh, Cloud, you’ve completely underestimated me, haven’t you? A SOLDIER can lie in wait for as long as they need to catch their quarry and complete their mission,” he uttered softly into the boy’s golden locks, pressing a kiss there as he finished. “Good night, little one.”

- that was priceless! *fangirl squeel*

lol, this is both funny and cute. as for ideas, how about 'the morning after', 'meeting angeal/genesis'(separately or together), 'babysitters' for when all four are gone on a mission, 'day out into the town', 'meeting aeris', 'turks' and maybe 'rufus'? sorry if they're all short words but i only seem to come up with short answers more easily :P. hope this helps and update soon, yeah?