 extra type 2009-01-13 . chapter 46Wow Genjuro is Whipped like cream man, its sad! Ino just has to ruin friendships over guys doesn't she, she needs to realize that Chouji is the only one for her |
 himena 2009-01-13 . chapter 46=D thank you for updating =3 |
 Ianes 2009-01-08 . chapter 45Its great, really exciting
pls update |
 HeartBrokenHinata 2008-11-29 . chapter 45poor Hinata |
 extra type 2008-10-12 . chapter 43Ohh i did not see the whole deamon thing coming! wow! |
 HeartBrokenHinata 2008-10-08 . chapter 43woah |
 Kira Acumichi 2008-09-26 . chapter 1take that hiashi |
 extra type 2008-09-26 . chapter 42This chapter was as cute as seiryu as a wolf :D |
 extra type 2008-09-20 . chapter 41hm is this interesting, a little fluffy, sorry just had to say it. but yeah alright you've had better chaps |
 June-Avatar11 2008-09-20 . chapter 41wait, i thought the medicine was for people wjo were alergic to an animal? does that mean naruto was alergic to whatever animal he turned into?
and plz tell me sieryu dosnt get changed too. that would be depressing. and what happened? what did he ask tsunade? was it only about his headband? or was there something else he asked with it. but at the moment i think back and i wonder who in hell made me think that he was going to tsunade about the whole ino/hinata problem.
I mean, cuz seriosly, who would go to the hokage for that? and even more, i dont see why he would go to tsunade for that when he could ask some1 he knew better.
like if he needs advice for that, he should tell naruto. cuz he is his best friend.
anyways, i loved this chapter! loved loved it! plz pzl plz update soon! :) |
 HeartBrokenHinata 2008-09-19 . chapter 41woah what a turn in events |
 June-Avatar11 2008-09-13 . chapter 40SORRY! I AM SO SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING! i love this story so much and all but i always get so cought up in the story that i barely ever remember to review.
but anyways, i loved it! this chapter was funny! i hope that he dosnt cheat on hinata, cuz if he does he will have a lot of pain and torture to look forward to from me.
why didn't he just say that he had a girlfriend? is it that hard to do? the moment she starts hitting on him he should tell her "sorry, but i have a girlfriend" or something like that. i wonder when she will find out about that. even better, i wonder how she will react.
ohh, how i love this story. hinata is awsome. by the way, did hinata see ino yet? i cant remember... and shouldn't sakura tell ino that seiryu has a girlfriend? i mean she should know that if by any chance hinata catches ino flirting with seiyu, (or even worse) that could ruin the whole relationship? i say that the next time sakura sees ino she should tell her about seiryu having a girlfriend.
and not only would hinatas heart be broken if something unwanted would happen, but it would make things so much more complicated.
oh, by the way, is seiryu asking for help about the ino/hinata problem? I have a feeling he is but at the same time i cant help but think i am wrong.
anyways, plz plz plz update soon! i cant wait to read what happens next! :) |
 HeartBrokenHinata 2008-09-11 . chapter 40woah he's gonna ask for help |
 extra type 2008-09-11 . chapter 40They should call seiryu three legs *chuckle Chuckle*. But good chapters i really like the ones you make up yourselves. And i have to say your abilities for cliff hangers are amazing. |
 extra type 2008-09-10 . chapter 39OMG this was almost as bad as episode 101. If you don't know what that is, its the one were they need to find out what is behind kakashi's mask, and all it is is another mask. Possibly the worst, and best episode ever. This chapter is your episode 101. Horrible but in a good way. |