This story was very endearing. I like it very much and thought it extremely well written. :)

That was amazing I cried when Hermione saw him for the first time! It was so good I hope you will write more on this story!! :D

I really wish you would continue with the story. There is SUCH potential in this... It's like a story is lurking on the next page, the climax waiting in a keyboard or a pencil. The crescendos and decrescendos of a song flowing along, waiting to be heard...
~Fern

Please continue!!

o gawd this story made me cry! please do continue! it is very great and well written and there is so much mystery to solve still and questions to be answered! love it!

I would love to read more of this story.

while waiting for updates on your Ratatouille story I am rereading what you have written. This is really lovely! and again, I wish I wasn't a one shot. but I understand . . .

That was beautiful! I saw it coming that Rose would be Hermione's daughter, but I thought that Rose and Hugo would be twins separated at birth or some Parent-Trap styled story like that. Excellent twist. Please continue!

Great start! Hope to see more soon!

SARAH

DIdn't see this story coming. I liked it, and wonder what happens at the hospital.

HI, as usual, this is again an very nicely done chapter. However, I am wondering if you plan to continue "Book of the dead". I saw your wrote other short drabbles that fit into that saga and i hope you will update that story soon! Thansk for all your time and efforts! Reka

I thought this was a good story with a surprise ending. I was expecting Hermione's late husband to have been Ron. I though your plot was very original but I don't think I would read it as a long chaptered story. I'd rather see Snape and Hermione being snarky with each other see the reactions of Hermione's friends when her and Snape fall in love. Still think you're as talented as J.K. though. Keep up the great work!

I would be very interested in a continuation of this story. Hurt/comfort is my craving with slow recovery full of pain and ultimate contentment. This has the makings of some such a thing. I do hope you make it into a chaptered fic, if your muse and real life are agreeable.

This is a marvelous story. I'd love to see more, just to see if Severus can be made better by magical healing and if he and Hermione can connect once again! You have such a great talent, and I would be very pleased to read more if you are feeling inspired to write more.

Well--Hugo's lost a girlfriend and gained a sister. But how did Rose and Severus end up in the States? Here's hoping magical healing can help a lot!